Re: [Acme] I-D Action: draft-ietf-acme-ari-03.txt

2024-03-05 Thread Aaron Gable
Apologies for the late reply, I've been on vacation. On Tue, Feb 27, 2024 at 3:05 AM Rob Stradling wrote: > Carl wrote: > > If this mechanism only applies to certs that conform to a profile that > requires presence of key identifier in the AKID extension, state that up > front. > > I think this

Re: [Acme] I-D Action: draft-ietf-acme-ari-03.txt

2024-02-27 Thread Salz, Rich
And the “(without the tag and length bytes)” should not be in parenthesis, as it is not an aside but a key requirement. From: Acme on behalf of "Salz, Rich" Date: Tuesday, February 27, 2024 at 9:30 AM To: Carl Wallace , Aaron Gable Cc: "acme@ietf.org" Subject: Re: [Acm

Re: [Acme] I-D Action: draft-ietf-acme-ari-03.txt

2024-02-27 Thread Salz, Rich
[CW] I meant something like this (which also corrects a typo in the third word): “The unique identifier is constructed by concatenating the base64url-encoding (see Section 5 of [RFC4648]) of the bytes of the keyIdentifier field of certificate's Authority Key Identifier (AKI) extension (see Sect

Re: [Acme] I-D Action: draft-ietf-acme-ari-03.txt

2024-02-27 Thread Rob Stradling
jected. From: Acme on behalf of Aaron Gable Sent: 27 February 2024 05:23 To: Carl Wallace Cc: acme@ietf.org Subject: Re: [Acme] I-D Action: draft-ietf-acme-ari-03.txt CAUTION: This email originated from outside of the organization. Do not click links or open a

Re: [Acme] I-D Action: draft-ietf-acme-ari-03.txt

2024-02-27 Thread Carl Wallace
Inline… From: Aaron Gable Date: Tuesday, February 27, 2024 at 12:23 AM To: Carl Wallace Cc: Subject: Re: [Acme] I-D Action: draft-ietf-acme-ari-03.txt On Mon, Feb 26, 2024 at 4:36 AM Carl Wallace wrote: Two comments on the third paragraph of section 4.1: - The addition of section

Re: [Acme] I-D Action: draft-ietf-acme-ari-03.txt

2024-02-26 Thread Aaron Gable
On Mon, Feb 26, 2024 at 4:36 AM Carl Wallace wrote: > Two comments on the third paragraph of section 4.1: > > - The addition of section identifiers for the references makes the > sentences harder to read. Maybe wrapping the section identifiers and > reference in parentheses. > Thanks, this feedb

Re: [Acme] I-D Action: draft-ietf-acme-ari-03.txt

2024-02-26 Thread Carl Wallace
Two comments on the third paragraph of section 4.1: - The addition of section identifiers for the references makes the sentences harder to read. Maybe wrapping the section identifiers and reference in parentheses. - The preparation of the URI uses the keyIdentifier field of AuthorityKeyIdentifi

[Acme] I-D Action: draft-ietf-acme-ari-03.txt

2024-02-08 Thread internet-drafts
Internet-Draft draft-ietf-acme-ari-03.txt is now available. It is a work item of the Automated Certificate Management Environment (ACME) WG of the IETF. Title: Automated Certificate Management Environment (ACME) Renewal Information (ARI) Extension Author: None Name:draft-ietf-acme