Re: [alto] Review for draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-12

2020-11-17 Thread Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Paris-Saclay)
iew for draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-12 Dear all, Please, find here below the review for the Unified Properties draft. /* General comments */ .- Section 2 - Requirements language - as general comment, the usage of words such as MUST, MAY, etc should be reviewed in all of the occurrences

Re: [alto] Review for draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-12

2020-10-13 Thread Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Paris-Saclay)
view for draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-12 Dear all, Please, find here below the review for the Unified Properties draft. /* General comments */ .- Section 2 - Requirements language - as general comment, the usage of words such as MUST, MAY, etc should be reviewed in all of the occurrences in the

[alto] Review for draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-12

2020-10-12 Thread LUIS MIGUEL CONTRERAS MURILLO
Dear all, Please, find here below the review for the Unified Properties draft. /* General comments */ .- Section 2 - Requirements language - as general comment, the usage of words such as MUST, MAY, etc should be reviewed in all of the occurrences in the text. In some of them they do not