Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review result: Almost Ready
I reviewed this document as part of the IoT Directorate's effort to
IoT-related IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments
were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors.
Document authors, document editors,
(we can apply the lazy-fix policy and let IESG find them ;-) )
A bit off topic, but that is *not* the IESG's job. Unfortunately the IESG often
wastes time on this rather than sending it on to the RFC Editor, whose job it
is. I believe it's better for everybody if this is done by the authors.
I did check just now - the review comments were addressed. I added a few new
text issues in the issue tracker #42 to #46
(https://github.com/anima-wg/brski-cloud/issues) and a request to change one
more item for #32.
This is based on reading the new text and re-reading the old. These are things
