Much thanks for Michael Richardson for putting these diffs together. Comments
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> On Feb 14, 2018, at 1:09 PM, Michael Richardson wrote:
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> tl:dr: https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-bootstrap/pull/41
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> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra
William Atwood wrote:
> As a result of trying to understand (and then to model) the protocol
> flow for BRSKI, I have made a review of
Bill also did an extensive grammar review, which was invaluable.
The URL: https://goo.gl/pXNghv now shows all the changes as they are all
pushed onto the
tl:dr: https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-bootstrap/pull/41
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-10&url2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/anima-wg/anima-bootstrap/bill-atwood-comments/dtbootstrap-anima-keyinfra.txt
or: https://goo.gl/pXNghv
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As a result of trying to understand (and then to model) the protocol
flow for BRSKI, I have made a review of
draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-09. The following are my
technical comments. A separate list of suggested minor editorial
changes has been sent to the authors.
Bill
Section 1,
