Re: License Draft: Tortured text re obligations...

2006-12-17 Thread Karl Dubost
Le 17 déc. 2006 à 11:24, Bob Wyman a écrit : There is, I think a bit of tortured text in James Snell's otherwise useful License ID[1]. 1.3. Terminology bob wyman [1] http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-snell-atompub-feed- license-10.txt +1 -- Karl Dubost -

License Draft: Tortured text re obligations...

2006-12-16 Thread Bob Wyman
There is, I think a bit of tortured text in James Snell's otherwise useful License ID[1]. 1.3. Terminology ... The term license refers to a potentially machine-readable description of explicit rights, and associated obligations, that have been granted to consumers of an Atom feed or entry. The

Re: License Draft: Tortured text re obligations...

2006-12-16 Thread Mike Linksvayer
On Sat, 2006-12-16 at 21:24 -0500, Bob Wyman wrote: I realize that this is a bit more wordy than the existing text, however, I think it better perserves the author's intent. Also, it has the nice attribute of limiting the discussion of obligations to the scope of rights granted by the

Re: License Draft: Tortured text re obligations...

2006-12-16 Thread James M Snell
+1. Another good edit. I've started working on draft 11 with these edits. - James Bob Wyman wrote: There is, I think a bit of tortured text in James Snell's otherwise useful License ID[1]. 1.3. Terminology ... The term license refers to a potentially machine-readable