Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem

Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem this poem gave me some words to use on scrabble, thankyou for my new weapons URL: https://forum.audiogames.net/post/615467/#p615467 -- Audiogames-reflector mailing list Audiogames-reflector@sabahattin-gucukoglu.com https://sabahattin-gucukoglu.com/cgi-bin

Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem

Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem I like it. It reminds me a bit of Daniel Higgs, who isn't for everybody, but he's one of the few people, actually the only person I know of offhand, who does poems as songs, which is what they started out as before, at some time, they became primarily w

Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem

Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem To me it sounded like being trapped in something so sad that it becomes this depressive trippy state of being. I get the cog in the big machine thing too. That we're pushed on and on but have no reason why or where we're going. It's well written but I

Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem

Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem AAnd a qwick advice  :   () A person who has regard in writing only to the taste of his century thinks more of his person than of his writings: it is always necessary to reach for what is perfect; the justice that  is sometimes refused us by our contemporaries will

Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem

Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem An  interesting poem, @1, What  were your sources?  Did you have any inspiration for it?   I know this is a horible question, since, there nothing worst than reminding a poet about inspiration.  May be the poem is a bit also about the nature of stangnation, worth

Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem

Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem The whole time I was reading I felt like my life was on display.  I don't really know how to put it save for saying that it feels like you're always aware of this necessity to, as long as you're alive at least, keep some semblance of equanimity, no mat

Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem

Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem I've never performed it - I only wrote the damn thing a couple of weeks ago - but I'm acutely aware of how I would want it to sound out loud. Speaking it would definitely add another dimension to it though, that's for sure. URL: https://forum.audi

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Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem I definitely think you could add a whole lot more meaning to the words if you were to perform this at a slam; it has the spoken word feel about it. I'd come to hear that. URL: https://forum.audiogames.net/post/615121/#p615121 -- Audiogames-reflector ma

Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem

Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem Zarvox, you've hit at the overall meaning of the poem. There is no possible way you could parse all the imagery without knowing me really, really well though, so don't feel bad.And that goes for you too, Defender. lolThis poem means several things to m

Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem

Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem Poetry is too hard for me. So good job lol. My interpretation is that you try but you fail, but your grit tells you to move forward. That's as far as I got to understanding. URL: https://forum.audiogames.net/post/615108/#p615108 -- Audiogames-reflector ma

Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem

Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem Poetry is too hard for me. So good job lol URL: https://forum.audiogames.net/post/615108/#p615108 -- Audiogames-reflector mailing list Audiogames-reflector@sabahattin-gucukoglu.com https://sabahattin-gucukoglu.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/audiogames-reflector

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Re: Spin, Spin: a Poem o, pretty words!And that's basically as far as my comprehension of poetry goes.So if it means a single thing to you, just know that a complete noob appreciates it at least, even though I got lost after the first like, 6 sentences. URL:

Spin Spin: a Poem

Spin Spin: a Poem I wrote this while in a very peculiar state of mind. I'm wondering what any of you who are more into poetry (free verse, in this case) will think of it.Spin, SpinWhen a door closesIn the quiet, quiet, with a bang!Metallic bang, a bang trails away on l