On Tue, 6 Feb 2024 08:39:01 GMT, Alexey Ivanov <aiva...@openjdk.org> wrote:

> Replace _“effect”_ with _“affect”_¹ because the meaning in the phrase “…the 
> changes only _effect_ subsequent notification” is to “have an effect on.”
> 
> Add a comma to separate a conditional clause from the main one.
> 
> Use `<p>` instead of `<br>`: the example should be either in-line or in a 
> separate paragraph.
> 
> Amend grammar: “a key _listeners_ is added.” Here, the usage of the 
> indefinite article and the singular form of _“to be”_ implies the subject is 
> singular.
> 
> ¹ For reference, see [‘Affect’ vs. 
> ‘Effect’](https://www.merriam-webster.com/grammar/affect-vs-effect-usage-difference).

This pull request has now been integrated.

Changeset: 5daf622a
Author:    Alexey Ivanov <aiva...@openjdk.org>
URL:       
https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/commit/5daf622aea8ccb914dd7fa3680ddd3114dc6a0c1
Stats:     4 lines in 1 file changed: 0 ins; 0 del; 4 mod

8325309: Amend "Listeners and Threads" in AWTThreadIssues.html

Reviewed-by: serb, tr

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PR: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/17725

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