Author: dmagda
Date: Fri Mar 27 20:35:58 2020
New Revision: 1875792

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1875792&view=rev
Log:
improving text on the front page

Modified:
    ignite/site/trunk/download.html
    ignite/site/trunk/index.html

Modified: ignite/site/trunk/download.html
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/ignite/site/trunk/download.html?rev=1875792&r1=1875791&r2=1875792&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- ignite/site/trunk/download.html (original)
+++ ignite/site/trunk/download.html Fri Mar 27 20:35:58 2020
@@ -811,7 +811,7 @@ under the License.
                 signatures of the downloaded files before opening them.</p>
             <p>For more information about Apache release policy see
                 <a href="http://www.apache.org/dev/release.html#what";>What is 
a Release?</a></p>
-            
+
             <table class="table table-bordered table-striped">
                 <thead>
                 <tr>

Modified: ignite/site/trunk/index.html
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/ignite/site/trunk/index.html?rev=1875792&r1=1875791&r2=1875792&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- ignite/site/trunk/index.html (original)
+++ ignite/site/trunk/index.html Fri Mar 27 20:35:58 2020
@@ -195,9 +195,8 @@ under the License.
     <div id="intro-text" class="section-block">
         <div class="container">
         <p>
-            Apache Ignite&reg; is a horizontally scalable, fault-tolerant 
distributed in-memory
-            computing platform used to build real-time applications processing 
terabytes of data with in-memory
-            speed.
+            Apache Ignite® is a horizontally scalable, fault-tolerant 
distributed in-memory computing platform for
+            building real-time applications that can process terabytes of data 
with in-memory speed.
         </p>
         </div>
     </div>
@@ -233,7 +232,7 @@ under the License.
                         <h3>In-Memory Data Grid</h3>
                         <p>
                             Gain 100x acceleration by using Ignite as an
-                            advanced in-memory data grid on top of RDBMS, 
Hadoop or another store.
+                            advanced in-memory data grid on top of RDBMS, 
Hadoop or other data stores.
                         </p>
                     </a>
                 </div>
@@ -298,10 +297,11 @@ under the License.
                     <div class="txt-wrapper">
                         <h3>Digital Integration Hub</h3>
                         <p>
-                            Consolidate multiple internal systems and external 
data silos with Apache Ignite as a
-                            low-latency, high-performance shared data store. 
Use Apache Ignite to cache and persist data sets
-                            dispersed across multiple disjointed external 
databases and systems providing developers with
-                            functionally rich, unified and consistent APIs.
+                            A digital integration hub is an advanced platform 
architecture that aggregates multiple
+                            back-end systems and databases into a low-latency 
and shared data store.
+                            Use Apache Ignite to cache and persist data sets 
scattered across many disjointed back-end
+                            databases and/or SaaS platforms to make them 
instantly available to your applications
+                            through Apache Ignite’s functionally rich, 
unified and consistent APIs.
                         </p>
 
                         <a href="/use-cases/digital-integration-hub.html" 
class="btn btn-primary" title="Digital Integration Hub"
@@ -376,7 +376,7 @@ under the License.
                             </svg>
                             <h3>Distributed <span>Key-Value</span></h3>
                             <p>
-                                Read, write, and transact with high-performant 
key-value APIs that support JCache
+                                Read, write, and transact with 
high-performance key-value APIs that support JCache
                                 specification.
                             </p>
                         </a>


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