Re: [RFR] Installation Guide - update of apt-setup section for multiple CDs

2008-03-05 Thread Frans Pop
On Wednesday 05 March 2008, Jens Seidel wrote: > > +The amount of data that will be downloaded if you do select a mirror > > thus > > Drop "do"? Adding "do" here adds emphasis. Note that "do" would be required if the sentence were negative ("... if you do not select ..."), so it is definitely no

Re: [RFR] Installation Guide - update of apt-setup section for multiple CDs

2008-03-05 Thread Frans Pop
On Thursday 06 March 2008, Philip Hands wrote: > > > If you are installing from a full CD or a DVD that is part of a > > > larger > > > > I would drop the "a" infront of DVD or "full" altogeher. > > I'd rather say that you should drop the full here, since the "is part of > a larger set" implies a f

Re: [RFR] Installation Guide - update of apt-setup section for multiple CDs

2008-03-05 Thread Philip Hands
-BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE- Hash: SHA1 Jens Seidel wrote: ... > > If you are installing from a full CD or a DVD that is part of a larger > > I would drop the "a" infront of DVD or "full" altogeher. ... I'd rather say that you should drop the full here, since the "is part of a larger set" i

Re: [RFR] Installation Guide - update of apt-setup section for multiple CDs

2008-03-05 Thread Jens Seidel
On Wed, Mar 05, 2008 at 03:27:02AM +0100, Frans Pop wrote: > I've updated the section in the installation guide about configuring apt to > describe that it is now possible to scan multiple CDs. > > I'd welcome comments on the new text before I commit the changes. My comments are maybe a little b

Re: [RFR] Installation Guide - update of apt-setup section for multiple CDs

2008-03-04 Thread Frans Pop
On Wednesday 05 March 2008, Christian Perrier wrote: > While writing this, I'm wondering whether we could launch the > -l10n-english fellows on the giant task of reviewing the installation > manual...As I stopped working on Smith reviews temporarily, I > have to keep them busy...:-) I'm not in fav

Re: [RFR] Installation Guide - update of apt-setup section for multiple CDs

2008-03-04 Thread Christian Perrier
Quoting Frans Pop ([EMAIL PROTECTED]): > Hi, > > I've updated the section in the installation guide about configuring apt to > describe that it is now possible to scan multiple CDs. > > I'd welcome comments on the new text before I commit the changes. I read the entire proposal and found nothi