Dear Debian maintainer,

On Friday, April 06, 2007, I sent you a notification about the beginning of a 
review
action on debconf templates for dtc-xen.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and annoucing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

The patch-nopo file contains a patch for the templates and control file(s).

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Friday, April 06, 2007. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. In case you are
short of time, I can either prepare and upload a non-maintainer upload
or prepare an upload for you.



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/home/bubulle/travail/debian/rewrite/TRANS/dtc-xen/dtc-xen.old/debian/templates 
    2007-04-03 08:41:17.114729549 +0200
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2007-05-01 15:15:08.645574437 +0200
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+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# for an advice to [EMAIL PROTECTED]
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_soap_port
 Type: string
 Default: 8089
 _Description: Server port:
- What port should it bind to? Default is 8089.
+ Please enter the port the server will bind to.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_soap_login
 Type: string
 Default: dtc-xen
 _Description: SOAP server login:
- dtc-xen will bind a SOAP python server on which a dtc panel can connect to
- in order to start, stop create and destroy a VPS. What login do you want
- to create on that server.
+ Dtc-xen will connect to a SOAP Python server (to which a dtc panel can 
connect, in
+ order to start, stop, create and destroy a Virtual Private Server).
+ .
+ Please enter the login name to connect to the server.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_soap_pass
 Type: password
 Default: dtc-xen
-_Description: SOAP server pass:
- dtc-xen will generate a password (in a .htpasswd file) that will hold the
- password for the login you have just configured. What password do you want
- to have generated in it?
+_Description: SOAP server password:
+ Dtc-xen will generate a .htpasswd file for the login you have just
+ configured.
+ .
+ Please enter the password to use in that file.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_soap_domain_name
 Type: string
 Default: example.com
 _Description: Server hostname:
- What will be the domain name for this dtc-xen server? This will be used as a
+ Please enter the domain name for the dtc-xen server. This will be used as a
  part of the URL by the SOAP dtc panel client.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_node_number
 Type: string
 Default: 0101
 _Description: VPS Server node number:
- dtc-xen will use that number as a VPS Server number and will make your VPS
- numbering using xenXXXXYY with X being the server number (what it's are
- asking you at the moment) and Y being the VPS number itself (xenYY). Note
- that this node number has to be between 4 and 5 chars, and that it will
- create something like nodeXXXX.example.com that will be your server
- hostname (which you can later add in your DTC control panel).
+ Please enter the value to use to set up VPS (Virtual Private Server)
+ numbering.
+ .
+ Assuming this value is 'XXXX', the node number will be 'xenXXXXYY',
+ YY being the VPS number itself (xenYY). This node number must be 4
+ or 5 characters long.
+ .
+ As a consequence of this choice, the server's hostname will be
+ nodeXXXX.example.com (which you can later add in your DTC control
+ panel).
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_debian_repository
 Type: string
 Default: ftp://ftp.us.debian.org/debian
-_Description: Debian repository for setting-up VPSes:
- dtc-xen will use that repository for creating VPSes, and will copy your
- /etc/apt/sources.list inside your VPS (so this will be used ONLY durring
- the debootstrap stage of the VPS creation).
+_Description: Debian repository for VPS creation:
+ Please enter the repository to use for creating the VPS (Virtual Private
+ Server). The current /etc/apt/sources.list file will be copied to the
+ created VPS so the repository you enter here will be used only during
+ the debootstrap stage of the VPS creation.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_netmask
 Type: string
 Default: 255.255.255.0
-_Description: Netmask to be setup in the VPSes:
- Please enter the Netmask to use when doing the VPS network customization
- when dtc-xen creates a VPS.
+_Description: Network mask for the VPS:
+ Please enter the network mask to use in the created Virtual Private
+ Server's network settings.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_network
 Type: string
 Default: 192.168.60.0
-_Description: Network to be setup in the VPSes:
- Please enter the Network address to use when doing the VPS network
- customization when dtc-xen creates a VPS.
+_Description: Network address for the VPS:
+ Please enter the network address to use in the created Virtual Private
+ Server's network settings.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_broadcast
 Type: string
 Default: 192.168.60.255
-_Description: Broadcast to be setup in the VPSes:
- Please enter the network broadcast address to use when doing the VPS
- network customization when dtc-xen creates a VPS.
+_Description: Broadcast address for the VPS:
+ Please enter the network broadcast address to use in the created
+ Virtual Private Server's network settings.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_gateway
 Type: string
 Default: 192.168.60.254
-_Description: Gateway to be setup in the VPSes:
- Please enter the network gateway address to use when doing the VPS network
- customization when dtc-xen creates a VPS.
+_Description: Gateway address for the VPS:
+ Please enter the network gateway address to use in the created
+ Virtual Private Server's network settings.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_linux_kernel_name
 Type: string
 Default: 2.6.16.27-xenU
-_Description: Xen Kernel release name:
- Enter here the kernel version number as it appears in the uname -a. A
- kernel domU with that name must be located in /boot (example:
- vmlinuz-2.6.16.27-xenU) and it's corresponding modules must be in
+_Description: Xen kernel release name:
+ Please enter the kernel version number as it appears with the
+ 'uname -a' command. 
+ .
+ A kernel domU with that name must be located in /boot (example:
+ vmlinuz-2.6.16.27-xenU) and its corresponding modules must be in
  /lib/modules.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_lvm_name
 Type: string
 Default: lvm1
-_Description: Volume group where to create VPS:
- dtc-xen creates physical partitions in a lvm volume group that you have to
- name here. This volume group has to be big enough to hold all the VMs you will
- setup later on this server. If you don't want to use lvm (because you don't
- care if loopback is slower), leave this as default and dtc-xen wont use it
- anyway.
+_Description: Volume group to create VPS in:
+ Dtc-xen creates physical partitions in an existing LVM volume group
+ .
+ Please enter that volume group name. The volume group size must fit
+ all the virtual machiness you will set up later on this server. If
+ you don't want to use LVM (because you don't care if loopback is
+ slower), leave this setting to the default value.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_info_finish_setup
 Type: note
-_Description: How to finish the install
+_Description: Installation completion
  To finish the installation, you need to launch
- /usr/sbin/dtc-xen_finish_install. This script will remove port
- forwarding from your sshd_config and add the grant of xm console
- to the group xenusers so your users can loggin to the physical
- console. It will then try to download the files needed to setup
- Gentoo and CentOS into your VMs. Note that the system is currently
- safe (nobody can connect to a physical console as xenXX, they will
- be rejected because the /etc/sudoers is not changed), but a basic
- user wont be able to log into his physical console using ssh.
+ /usr/sbin/dtc-xen_finish_install. 
+ .
+ This script will remove port forwarding from the current sshd_config
+ file and add the permission of xm console to the group xenusers so that
+ users can login to the physical console. It will then try to
+ download the files needed to setup Gentoo and CentOS into the
+ virtual machines. 
+ .
+ Please note that the system is currently safe (connections to a
+ physical console as xenXX will be rejected because the /etc/sudoers
+ is not changed), but a basic user won't be able to log into his
+ physical console using ssh.
+
+Template: dtc-xen/conf_vps_mountpoint
+Type: string
+Default: /var/lib/dtc-xen/mnt
+_Description: VPS mountpoint:
+ In order to setup the managed Virtual Private Server (VPS), dtc-xen
+ will mount the logical volume or file loopback partition on the dom0
+ of the Xen server.
+ .
+ Please enter the path to the mount point.
+ .
+ This information will also be used to automatically set the
+ /etc/fstab mount points, allowing faster mounting and maintenance of
+ the VPS.
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    2007-04-03 08:41:17.114729549 +0200
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2007-04-18 19:04:39.075341705 +0200
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 Priority: optional
 Architecture: all
 Depends: debconf, python, rrdtool, apache | apache2, python-soappy, 
python-crypto, m2crypto, debootstrap, openssl, sudo, rpmstrap, adduser
-Description: A SOAP daemon and help scripts so a control panel can manage Xen 
VMs
- dtc-xen is a SOAP server running over HTTPS with auth,
- so a web GUI tool can manage, create and destroy your
- domU under Xen. This package is to be run in the dom0
- of your Xen server. It's written to integrate within DTC
- web hosting control panel.
+Description: SOAP daemon and scripts to allow control panel management for Xen 
VMs
+ Dtc-xen is a SOAP server running over HTTPS with authentication, so
+ that a web GUI tool can manage, create and destroy domUs under
+ Xen. This package should be used in the dom0 of a Xen server. It
+ integrates itself within the DTC web hosting control panel.
  .
-  Homepage: <http://www.gplhost.com/software-dtc-xen.html>
+ Homepage: <http://www.gplhost.com/software-dtc-xen.html>

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