Dear Debian maintainer,

On Saturday, May 22, 2010, I sent you a notification about the beginning of a 
review
action on debconf templates for mini-buildd.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control
file(s) alone.

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Saturday, May 22, 2010. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- mini-buildd.old/debian/mini-buildd-common.templates 2010-03-24 
20:21:32.246651732 +0100
+++ mini-buildd/debian/mini-buildd-common.templates     2010-04-15 
08:05:46.713446972 +0200
@@ -1,11 +1,19 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: mini-buildd-common/purging_repository
 Type: note
-_Description: About to purge your repository
- You have selected to purge mini-buildd on a repository host.
+_Description: Repository purge
+ You have chosen to purge mini-buildd on a repository host.
  .
- Puging means to remove the mini-buildd user along with all its
- files, including the repository in "/home/mini-buildd/rep".
+ This choice means that the mini-buildd user will be removed along
+ with all the files it owns, including the repository in
+ "/home/mini-buildd/rep".
  .
- If you want to keep that data,
- .
-       BACK IT UP NOW BEFORE CONTINUING.
+ To keep this data, you need to back it up now.
--- mini-buildd.old/debian/mini-buildd-rep.templates    2010-03-24 
20:21:32.246651732 +0100
+++ mini-buildd/debian/mini-buildd-rep.templates        2010-04-15 
08:05:50.189446472 +0200
@@ -1,3 +1,12 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: mini-buildd-rep/mbd_id
 Type: string
 Description: Mini-buildd's identity:
@@ -15,7 +24,7 @@
 Description: Repository host name:
  Give the repository's host name; this is usually just the
  hostname you get via "hostname -f". This will be used to create
- URLs for HTTP acccess, and for ssh/scp commands.
+ URLs for HTTP access, and for ssh/scp commands.
 
 Template: mini-buildd-rep/mbd_httpport
 Type: string
@@ -50,8 +59,8 @@
 Template: mini-buildd-rep/mbd_dists
 Type: multiselect
 Choices: ${DISTS}
-Description: Basis distributions to support:
- Space separated list of basis distributions to support.
+Description: Base distributions to support:
+ Space separated list of base distributions to support.
 
 Template: mini-buildd-rep/mbd_archs
 Type: multiselect
@@ -62,8 +71,8 @@
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
 Description: Allow unauthenticated apt?
- This flag correspondents to the respective apt and sbuild
- options.
+ This flag is equivalent to the allow_unauthenticated option in
+ APT or sbuild.
  .
  If you set this to false (highly recommended), you will need to
  manually add the keys for extra sources you might have
@@ -80,8 +89,8 @@
 Type: select
 Choices: ${ARCHS}
 Description: Arch of builder to build non-arch binary packages:
- One builder machine must have the part to compile arch=all
- binary packages; just give that architecture here.
+ One builder machine must have the role of compiling arch=all
+ binary packages; please specify that architecture here.
 
 Template: mini-buildd-rep/mbd_source
 Type: string
@@ -89,13 +98,13 @@
  Apt sources for "${DIST}": ${DESC}
  .
  Notes:
-  * To specify more than one source, separate via "backslash n".
+  * To specify more than one source, separate them with "\n".
   * With PIN and PRIO you may optionally set an apt-pin; useful
     if an extra source is not in "not-automatic" mode.
   * Give arch-specific sources only if needed ("any" is
     fallback).
   .
-  Syntax : Apt sources line without leading "deb "[;PIN;PRIO]
+  Syntax: Apt sources line without leading "deb "[;PIN;PRIO]
   Example: ${EXAMPLE}
 
 Template: mini-buildd-rep/mbd_bldhost
@@ -116,9 +125,9 @@
  variable (see policy, chapter 4.9.1).
  .
  The only option that is useful here is "parallel=n"; use this
- if you have multiple CPUs/Cores at your hand for this archs
- build host. You will then have parallel builds (i.e. faster
- builds) for packages that support it.
+ if you have multiple CPUs/cores for this architecture's build
+ host. You will then have fast parallel builds for packages
+ that support it.
 
 Template: mini-buildd-rep/overview
 Type: note
@@ -128,10 +137,11 @@
  .
  ${URL}
  .
- CAVEAT: You need to enable your httpd's "userdir" option manually.
+ (The web server may need to be manually reconfigured to allow the
+ "userdir" option.)
  .
  Please note:
-  * On initial installs, or if you configured new build hosts:
-    *install* package "mini-buildd-bld" on all resp. build hosts.
-  * On reconfiguration with changes to supported dists or archs:
-    *reconfigure* package "mini-buildd-bld" on all build hosts.
+  * On initial installs, or if you configured new build hosts,
+    install the package "mini-buildd-bld" on the appropriate hosts.
+  * On reconfiguration with changes to supported dists or archs,
+    reconfigure the package "mini-buildd-bld" on all build hosts.
--- mini-buildd.old/debian/mini-buildd-bld.templates    2010-03-24 
20:21:32.246651732 +0100
+++ mini-buildd/debian/mini-buildd-bld.templates        2010-04-15 
08:06:10.637448532 +0200
@@ -1,54 +1,62 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: mini-buildd-bld/mbd_defer
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
+#flag:translate!:4
 Description: Defer builder configuration?
  To configure builder hosts, the repository host must already be
  set up and configured (as all the common configuration is
  pulled from there by builder hosts).
  .
- Defer configuration in case your mini-buildd repository host is
- not yet set up correctly. You must complete your setup by
- running dpkg-reconfigure manually later.
+ You should defer the configuration if the mini-buildd repository host is
+ not yet set up correctly. The process may be completed later by running
+ "dpkg-reconfigure mini-buildd".
  .
  ${STATUS}
 
 Template: mini-buildd-bld/mbd_rephttphost
 Type: string
-Description: Repository (http) host name:
- Give the full host name of the repository here -- that is the
- machine where mini-buildd-rep is installed. This will be used
- to retrieve the configuration of the mini-buildd network
- automatically via http.
+Description: HTTP repository host name:
+ Please enter the fully qualified host name of the repository to be
+ used (the machine where mini-buildd-rep is installed). This
+ will be used to retrieve the configuration of the mini-buildd network
+ automatically via HTTP.
  .
- If you need to specify a different port than the default (80),
- use something like "my.host.com:8088".
+ The syntax needed to specify a port number other than the default (80)
+ is "myhost.example.org:8088".
 
 Template: mini-buildd-bld/mbd_bldhost
 Type: select
 Choices: ${BLDHOSTS}
-Description: This builder's id:
- This builder's host name; you see the selection from the
- configuration of mini-buildd-rep. If your host is not listed,
+Description: ID for this builder:
+ Please select the host name for this builder from the list of
+ hosts known to mini-buildd-rep. If this host is not listed,
  you need to reconfigure mini-buildd-rep.
- .
- Default is the host matching $(hostname -f).
 
 Template: mini-buildd-bld/mbd_lvm_vg
 Type: string
 Default: auto
 Description: LVM2 volume group to use:
- You need a dedicated lvm volume group where the chroots are
- maintained (via schroot).
+ There will need to be a dedicated LVM volume group for the chroots
+ to be maintained on (with schroot).
  .
  In that volume group, mini-buildd will automatically maintain
  chroots named mbd-BASEDIST-ID-ARCH (ID is the identity you
- configured in mini-buildd-rep).  These names should not collide
- with existing logical volumes in that group, else any
- reasonably sized volume group should work. Either
- .
-  * Set this to "auto": An image file will be used automagically
-    in mini-buildd's home, and a lvm volume group named
-    "mini-buildd" be build on that via a loop device.
-  * Set it to an existing or to-be custom volume group (if your
-    create the volume group manually later, you need to
-    reconfigure this package).
+ configured in mini-buildd-rep). These names should not collide
+ with existing logical volumes in that group; otherwise any
+ reasonably sized volume group should work.
+ .
+ Possible choices are:
+  * auto: an image file will be created in mini-buildd's home,
+    and an LVM volume group named "mini-buildd" will be built using it;
+  * existing or custom volume group: if this volume group doesn't
+    exist now, you'll need to reconfigure this package after creating
+    it.
--- mini-buildd.old/debian/control      2010-03-24 20:21:32.246651732 +0100
+++ mini-buildd/debian/control  2010-04-12 07:31:04.442188776 +0200
@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@
 Package: mini-buildd-common
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, adduser, bsd-mailx | mailx, apache2-mpm-worker | 
httpd, openssh-client, gnupg, wget, sbuild (>= 0.57.7)
-Description: Minimal Debian buildd (common)
- Mini-buildd is an easy-to-setup Debian autobuilder and
- repository. Its general notion is that of addons for a Debian
+Description: minimal Debian build daemon - common files
+ Mini-buildd is an easy-to-configure Debian autobuilder and
+ repository. Its general notion is that of add-ons for a Debian
  base distribution (like etch, lenny, or sid) with an emphasis
  on clean builds and package checking.
  .
@@ -23,26 +23,24 @@
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, mini-buildd-common, python, mini-dinstall (>> 
0.6.24), cron, procps
 Recommends: logrotate, dwww
-Description: Minimal Debian buildd (repository)
- Mini-buildd is an easy-to-setup Debian autobuilder and
- repository. Its general notion is that of addons for a Debian
+Description: minimal Debian build daemon - repository
+ Mini-buildd is an easy-to-configure Debian autobuilder and
+ repository. Its general notion is that of add-ons for a Debian
  base distribution (like etch, lenny, or sid) with an emphasis
  on clean builds and package checking.
  .
- Install this package on the machine that should hold the
- autobuilder network's repository.
+ This package provides the autobuilder network's repository.
 
 Package: mini-buildd-bld
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, mini-buildd-common, lvm2, debootstrap (>= 
1.0.10lenny1), schroot, dput, dpkg-dev, devscripts (>= 2.10.15)
 Recommends: logrotate
-Description: Minimal Debian buildd (builder)
- Mini-buildd is an easy-to-setup Debian autobuilder and
- repository. Its general notion is that of addons for a Debian
+Description: minimal Debian build daemon - builder
+ Mini-buildd is an easy-to-configure Debian autobuilder and
+ repository. Its general notion is that of add-ons for a Debian
  base distribution (like etch, lenny, or sid) with an emphasis
  on clean builds and package checking.
  .
- Install this package on any machine that should act as a
- builder for a specific architecture. To successfully configure
- a builder, the repository host (see package mini-buildd-rep)
- must be fully set up first.
+ This package equips a machine to act as a builder for a specific
+ architecture. Before builders can be set up a repository host
+ must be fully configured (see the package mini-buildd-rep).
--- mini-buildd.old/debian/changelog    2010-03-24 20:21:32.246651732 +0100
+++ mini-buildd/debian/changelog        2010-05-17 07:01:49.505124949 +0200
@@ -1,3 +1,20 @@
+mini-buildd (0.8.13) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #577850
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+  * French (Alexandre Hoïde).  Closes: #579356
+  * Swedish (Martin Bagge).  Closes: #580146
+  * Russian (Yuri Kozlov).  Closes: #565575
+  * Danish (Joe Hansen).  Closes: #580268
+  * Russian (Yuri Kozlov).  Closes: #580387
+  * Portuguese (Pedro Ribeiro).  Closes: #580576
+  * German (Tobias Quathamer).  Closes: #581222
+  * Vietnamese (Clytie Siddall).  Closes: #581535
+  * Spanish (Francisco Javier Cuadrado).  Closes: #581869
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <bubu...@debian.org>  Thu, 15 Apr 2010 18:25:09 +0200
+
 mini-buildd (0.8.12) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * [3c2bf04] mbd-preinstall: Add support to configure local hook for

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