Bug#648387: [copyright-format] English proofreading.

2012-02-10 Thread Charles Plessy
Le Wed, Feb 08, 2012 at 05:55:06PM -0600, Jonathan Nieder a écrit : > > -Another kind of list value has one value per line. For example, > +Another type of field has one value per line. For example, Thanks to you and Justin for the proofreading. I have committed the change

Bug#648387: [copyright-format] English proofreading.

2012-02-08 Thread Jonathan Nieder
Justin B Rye wrote: >> Charles Plessy wrote: >>> - "Another kind of list value has one value per line". Not >>> straightforward... [...] > Shouldn't it be "Another type of list has one value per line"? The > values don't have one value per line - they only have one line each. Makes sense. I

Bug#648387: [copyright-format] English proofreading.

2012-02-08 Thread Justin B Rye
Jonathan Nieder wrote: > Charles Plessy wrote: >> - "Another kind of list value has one value per line". Not >> straightforward... > > Doesn't seem so bad. How would you propose rewording it? Shouldn't it be "Another type of list has one value per line"? The values don't have one value per l

Bug#648387: [copyright-format] English proofreading.

2012-02-08 Thread Jonathan Nieder
Hi Charles, Charles Plessy wrote: > here is an update of the English proofreading (attached as a patch). Looks good to me. [...] > - "Another kind of list value has one value per line". Not > straightforward... Doesn't seem so bad. How would you propose rewording it? > - "the Copyright f

Bug#648387: [copyright-format] English proofreading.

2012-02-08 Thread Charles Plessy
Le Tue, Nov 29, 2011 at 12:09:05AM +0900, Charles Plessy a écrit : > Le Mon, Nov 21, 2011 at 06:47:40PM +0100, gregor herrmann a écrit : > > On Mon, 14 Nov 2011 19:24:21 -0600, Jonathan Nieder wrote: > > > > > For what it's worth, I find the text more readable after JBR's changes > > > than before

Bug#648387: [copyright-format] English proofreading.

2011-11-21 Thread gregor herrmann
On Mon, 14 Nov 2011 19:24:21 -0600, Jonathan Nieder wrote: > For what it's worth, I find the text more readable after JBR's changes > than before. Same here. On Sun, 13 Nov 2011 11:01:05 -0600, Jonathan Nieder wrote: > DEP drivers: do these changes look reasonable to you? Policy > delegates:

Bug#648387: [copyright-format] English proofreading.

2011-11-14 Thread Charles Plessy
Steve, it has been monthes that we are waiting for you to say more precisely what is wrong with the current text. Your comments were promised by Lars for April: “Steve, my co-driver, says he has a couple of issues he wants to fix before we are finished with DEP5. He'll write patches and subm

Bug#648387: [copyright-format] English proofreading.

2011-11-14 Thread Steve Langasek
On Mon, Nov 14, 2011 at 07:24:21PM -0600, Jonathan Nieder wrote: > Steve Langasek wrote: > > I think merging such changes (which at a glance appear to include arbitrary > > preferences of word choice) is a waste of everyone's time and I'm inclined > > to ignore this altogether in favor of working

Bug#648387: [copyright-format] English proofreading.

2011-11-14 Thread Jonathan Nieder
Steve Langasek wrote: > I think merging such changes (which at a glance appear to include arbitrary > preferences of word choice) is a waste of everyone's time and I'm inclined > to ignore this altogether in favor of working on the real problems with the > text. So, to be clear, does that mean th

Bug#648387: [copyright-format] English proofreading.

2011-11-14 Thread Steve Langasek
On Sun, Nov 13, 2011 at 11:01:05AM -0600, Jonathan Nieder wrote: > > To consolidate related changes, let's wait however a little > > for additional propositions. For instance, I would like to suggest to > > replace > > “dash” by “hyphen” > I disagree here. Please file separate reports for separ

Bug#648387: [copyright-format] English proofreading.

2011-11-14 Thread Charles Plessy
tag 648387 + patch thanks Le Sun, Nov 13, 2011 at 11:01:05AM -0600, Jonathan Nieder a écrit : > > Please file separate reports for separate proposals, > unless the text they affect and subject matter seem to overlap a lot > and the proposed text is already ready. No problem. In that case, given

Bug#648387: [copyright-format] English proofreading.

2011-11-13 Thread Jonathan Nieder
Hi Charles et al, Charles Plessy wrote: > thanks a lot Justin for the proofreading. Thanks for making it happen! > I read it in details and agree with > all the changes you propose. I therefore propose to the debian-policy team to > apply your patch. I agree --- after a careful look, I didn't

Bug#648387: [copyright-format] English proofreading.

2011-11-10 Thread Charles Plessy
Package: debian-policy Version: 3.9.2 Severity: wishlist X-Debbugs-CC: debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org Dear Justin and everybody, thanks a lot Justin for the proofreading. I read it in details and agree with all the changes you propose. I therefore propose to the debian-policy team to appl