Re: [jira] Commented: (DERBY-1968) Derby tools guide: Long line in documentation of ij.dataSource

2006-10-19 Thread Kim Haase
Thanks very much, Øystein. Kim Øystein Grøvlen (JIRA) wrote On 10/18/06 19:11,: > [ > http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1968?page=comments#action_12443379 > ] > > Øystein Grøvlen commented on DERBY-1968: > > > Looks very good.

[jira] Commented: (DERBY-1968) Derby tools guide: Long line in documentation of ij.dataSource

2006-10-18 Thread JIRA
[ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1968?page=comments#action_12443379 ] Øystein Grøvlen commented on DERBY-1968: Looks very good. I recommend that it be committed. > Derby tools guide: Long line in documentation of ij.dataSour

[jira] Commented: (DERBY-1968) Derby tools guide: Long line in documentation of ij.dataSource

2006-10-18 Thread JIRA
[ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1968?page=comments#action_12443262 ] Øystein Grøvlen commented on DERBY-1968: Putting each property on a separate line seems fine to me. For the example I suggest saying that ij on start-up co

[jira] Commented: (DERBY-1968) Derby tools guide: Long line in documentation of ij.dataSource

2006-10-17 Thread Kim Haase (JIRA)
[ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1968?page=comments#action_12443074 ] Kim Haase commented on DERBY-1968: -- Yes, that works fine for the lines above -- the tags italicize the placeholders. There's a problem in the example below, th

[jira] Commented: (DERBY-1968) Derby tools guide: Long line in documentation of ij.dataSource

2006-10-17 Thread Laura Stewart (JIRA)
[ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1968?page=comments#action_12443057 ] Laura Stewart commented on DERBY-1968: -- Can both the bold and italic be omitted? I think that the example is clear without them. If the italic is desired, the

[jira] Commented: (DERBY-1968) Derby tools guide: Long line in documentation of ij.dataSource

2006-10-17 Thread Kim Haase (JIRA)
[ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1968?page=comments#action_12443054 ] Kim Haase commented on DERBY-1968: -- This is in the file rtoolsijproprefdatasource.dita. I notice that the codeblock that contains the long line looks strange. I t

[jira] Commented: (DERBY-1968) Derby tools guide: Long line in documentation of ij.dataSource

2006-10-17 Thread JIRA
[ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1968?page=comments#action_12442885 ] Øystein Grøvlen commented on DERBY-1968: I think it would also be good if the associated example (and other examples in this manual) included a statement o