#16044: "Writing views" documentation reference a nonexistent "previous chapter"
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               Reporter:  aplanas@…  |          Owner:  nobody
                   Type:  Bug        |         Status:  new
              Milestone:             |      Component:  Documentation
                Version:  SVN        |       Severity:  Normal
             Resolution:             |       Keywords:  Documentarion
           Triage Stage:  Ready for  |      Has patch:  0
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    Needs documentation:  0          |  Easy pickings:  0
Patch needs improvement:  0          |
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Changes (by lukeplant):

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 * stage:  Unreviewed => Ready for checkin


Old description:

> Reference: http://docs.djangoproject.com/en/dev//topics/http/views/
>
> The last line of the first paragraph of the "Writin views" section
> assert:
>
> """For the sake of putting the code somewhere, let’s create a file called
> views.py in the mysite directory, which you created in the previous
> chapter."""
>
> I guest that this 'whick you created in the previous chapter' is a C&P
> error from the book. May be the correct line will be more like to:
>
> """For the sake of putting the code somewhere, the recomendarion is to
> put our views in the file called views.py, placed in our proyect or
> application directory"""

New description:

 Reference: http://docs.djangoproject.com/en/dev//topics/http/views/

 The last line of the first paragraph of the "Writin views" section assert:

 """For the sake of putting the code somewhere, let’s create a file called
 views.py in the mysite directory, which you created in the previous
 chapter."""

 I guest that this 'whick you created in the previous chapter' is a C&P
 error from the book. Maybe the correct line will be more like:

 """For the sake of putting the code somewhere, the recommendation is to
 put views in a file called views.py, placed in your project or application
 directory"""

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Comment:

 Agreed. I fixed some typos in your description, and modified the grammar
 of your suggestion too, to use 'you' instead of 'we', since 'we' at that
 point is really only suitable in a tutorial context.

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