[DNSOP] Artart early review of draft-ietf-dnsop-domain-verification-techniques-05

2024-07-11 Thread Barry Leiba via Datatracker
Reviewer: Barry Leiba Review result: Ready This has a significantly expanded scope from the -01 version that I reviewed a while ago. I think it's solid, well written, and ready for last call. ___ DNSOP mailing list -- dnsop@ietf.org To unsubscribe sen

[DNSOP] Artart telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-avoid-fragmentation-16

2023-12-29 Thread Barry Leiba via Datatracker
Reviewer: Barry Leiba Review result: Ready with Nits Thanks for addressing most comments from my earlier review. One remains, and I didn’t see an email response about it, so I don’t know whether there was a reason not to make a change or if it just got overlooked: — Section 7.2 — If a UDP re

[DNSOP] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-avoid-fragmentation-15

2023-10-23 Thread Barry Leiba via Datatracker
Reviewer: Barry Leiba Review result: Ready with Issues Thanks for an easy-to-read and useful document. I have just a few minor issues to raise here: — Section 1 — TCP avoids fragmentation using its Maximum Segment Size (MSS) parameter, but each transmitted segment is header-size aware suc

[DNSOP] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-caching-resolution-failures-06

2023-08-09 Thread Barry Leiba via Datatracker
Reviewer: Barry Leiba Review result: Ready with Nits Thanks for a well-written document. I found the background information in Section 1.1 to be particularly interesting. Just a couple of very small editorial points there: operating system vendor was providing non-root trust anchors to the

[DNSOP] Artart early review of draft-ietf-dnsop-domain-verification-techniques-01

2023-04-03 Thread Barry Leiba via Datatracker
Reviewer: Barry Leiba Review result: Ready with Nits This is short and reasonably sweet, easily digested. I have a few minor comments that I think will help make the document slightly clearer, and I hope you'll consider them: — Section 3.1 — I think this is generally understandable, but reuse o

[DNSOP] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-22

2023-03-14 Thread Barry Leiba via Datatracker
Reviewer: Barry Leiba Review result: Ready Thanks for a clear, concise, and, if I may say, valuable document. I couldn't even find any typos. I have two very minor comments, both of which can be ignored if you prefer: 1. In Section 4, you use "somename.alt" -- was that chosen over "example.alt"

[DNSOP] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnsop-server-cookies-04: (with COMMENT)

2020-12-15 Thread Barry Leiba via Datatracker
Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-dnsop-server-cookies-04: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer

[DNSOP] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnsop-no-response-issue-20: (with COMMENT)

2020-04-07 Thread Barry Leiba via Datatracker
Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-dnsop-no-response-issue-20: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please ref

[DNSOP] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc2845bis-07: (with COMMENT)

2020-03-09 Thread Barry Leiba via Datatracker
Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc2845bis-07: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to h

[DNSOP] Barry Leiba's Yes on draft-ietf-dnsop-algorithm-update-07: (with COMMENT)

2019-04-07 Thread Barry Leiba via Datatracker
Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-dnsop-algorithm-update-07: Yes When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to http