Greetings again. This looks much better than the -00, but still needs more
effort.
The language in the text is still very rough (larger than nits, not quite as
bad as confusing). I believe that the amount of copy editing done by the RFC
Editor depends on the stream through which you submit the
Hello Paul.
First off, this is an RSSAC document so it is not clear why you think someone
from the root
opserator community should do the copy editing.
The paragraph at the end of section 1 (the isn't really 2119 language text)
is quite cute and will cause you a world of pain and delay.
On Feb 6, 2012, at 5:19 PM, bmann...@vacation.karoshi.com wrote:
First off, this is an RSSAC document so it is not clear why you think someone
from the root
opserator community should do the copy editing.
There is a large/complete overlap between the RSSAC and the root server
operators.
On Mon, Feb 06, 2012 at 05:52:12PM -0500, Paul Hoffman wrote:
On Feb 6, 2012, at 5:19 PM, bmann...@vacation.karoshi.com wrote:
First off, this is an RSSAC document so it is not clear why you think
someone from the root
opserator community should do the copy editing.
There is a
