Reviewer: James Gannon Review result: Ready Hi Folks, I am the assigned DNSDIR reviewer for this draft. Thank you for a well-written draft that appears to be very comprehensive
Some very minor comments that are non-blocking. Section 1: Personal Preference: The intro section seems to be a little unfocused, if you take another pass at the document I would suggest tightening it down to the doc's goal more succinctly. Section 2: Context for resolving a name: The global DNS root zone distributed by PTI. - This line seems to be very light compared to others Suggestion: This kind of document would work well in a more dynamic format similar to some of the work being done on updating the IETF Tao, something to potentially consider post-publishing. _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list DNSOP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
