While I am reviewing this version of the draft, the other problem I see is a 
block of text that reads:

"RFC 8145 relies on resolvers reporting the list of keys that they have to root 
servers.”

The grammatical construction is ambiguous - I suspect that whoever originally 
submitted this tect back for the -03 version meant to say:

"RFC 8145 relies on resolvers reporting towards the root servers a list of 
locally cached trust anchors for the root zone.”

The document also makes the comment: "The authors (gratefully) accept pull 
requests.”. I suspect a more prudent course of action from now on is that “The 
authors will refer all pull requests to this working group before applying any 
changes to the draft.”

Geoff



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