In favor of reviewing and adoption.

Some small editorial nits...

In section 1.2

   The server may have knowledge of multiple BSK public keys

   corresponding to multiple devices, and existing TLS mechanisms are

   leveraged that enable the server to *identity* a specific bootstrap

   public key corresponding to a specific device.


Should "identity" be "identify"?


In 2.1

   An [I-D.ietf-tls-external-psk-importer] EPSK is made of *of* the tuple
   of (Base Key, External Identity, Hash).  The EPSK is derived from the
   BSK public key using [RFC5869] with the hash algorithm from the
   ciphersuite:


Duplicate word “of”


Dave Halasz
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