Re: Picture Book Mockup

2009-03-06 Thread Luya Tshimbalanga
-BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE- Hash: SHA1 Ian Weller a écrit : | On Tue, Mar 03, 2009 at 11:07:38PM -0800, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: | Setting in critic mode: | Did you use hyphen or em dashes in first and last paragraph? | Careful with the widow at the end of last paragraph? | Title Chapter

Re: Picture Book Mockup

2009-03-06 Thread Martin Sourada
On Fri, 2009-03-06 at 02:44 -0800, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: Ian Weller a écrit : | On Tue, Mar 03, 2009 at 11:07:38PM -0800, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: | Setting in critic mode: | Did you use hyphen or em dashes in first and last paragraph? | Careful with the widow at the end of last paragraph?

Re: Picture Book Mockup

2009-03-04 Thread Nicu Buculei
Máirín Duffy wrote: http://duffy.fedorapeople.org/collateral/picturebook/mocks/friendsmockup.png The general layout is pretty much the same I was thinking about. I only think it may be too much blue, I would like the photo bigger and less empty (blue) space, something more like

Re: Picture Book Mockup

2009-03-04 Thread Martin Sourada
On Wed, 2009-03-04 at 16:18 -0600, Ian Weller wrote: On Tue, Mar 03, 2009 at 11:07:38PM -0800, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: Setting in critic mode: Did you use hyphen or em dashes in first and last paragraph? Careful with the widow at the end of last paragraph? Title Chapter 2: Friends is

Re: Picture Book Mockup

2009-03-04 Thread Paul W. Frields
On Wed, Mar 04, 2009 at 11:46:12PM +0100, Martin Sourada wrote: On Wed, 2009-03-04 at 16:18 -0600, Ian Weller wrote: On Tue, Mar 03, 2009 at 11:07:38PM -0800, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: Setting in critic mode: Did you use hyphen or em dashes in first and last paragraph? Careful with the

Re: Picture Book Mockup

2009-03-04 Thread Mario Torre
Il giorno mar, 03/03/2009 alle 22.44 -0600, Ian Weller ha scritto: On Tue, Mar 03, 2009 at 01:41:43PM -0800, Máirín Duffy wrote: Let the games begin! :) My concept for the theme of the book here is a guide on how to be Fedora. There would be 4 chapters, freedom, friends, features, first.

Picture Book Mockup

2009-03-03 Thread Máirín Duffy
http://duffy.fedorapeople.org/collateral/picturebook/mocks/friendsmockup.png (SVG in same directory) Let the games begin! :) My concept for the theme of the book here is a guide on how to be Fedora. There would be 4 chapters, freedom, friends, features, first. The photos for each chapter will

Re: Picture Book Mockup

2009-03-03 Thread Ian Weller
On Tue, Mar 03, 2009 at 01:41:43PM -0800, Máirín Duffy wrote: http://duffy.fedorapeople.org/collateral/picturebook/mocks/friendsmockup.png (SVG in same directory) Let the games begin! :) My concept for the theme of the book here is a guide on how to be Fedora. There would be 4 chapters,

Re: Picture Book Mockup

2009-03-03 Thread Ian Weller
On Tue, Mar 03, 2009 at 01:41:43PM -0800, Máirín Duffy wrote: Let the games begin! :) My concept for the theme of the book here is a guide on how to be Fedora. There would be 4 chapters, freedom, friends, features, first. The photos for each chapter will have the model's perspective on the

Re: Picture Book Mockup

2009-03-03 Thread Colby Hoke
: Tuesday, March 3, 2009 4:41:43 PM GMT -05:00 US/Canada Eastern Subject: Picture Book Mockup http://duffy.fedorapeople.org/collateral/picturebook/mocks/friendsmockup.png (SVG in same directory) Let the games begin! :) My concept for the theme of the book here is a guide on how to be Fedora

Re: Picture Book Mockup

2009-03-03 Thread Luya Tshimbalanga
Setting in critic mode: Did you use hyphen or em dashes in first and last paragraph? Careful with the widow at the end of last paragraph? Title Chapter 2: Friends is hard to read due to similar hue. Enlighten it might help. -- Luya Tshimbalanga Graphic Web Design E: l...@fedoraproject.org