> poetry haiku..then that one should know that syllables are in sets
> of 5-
> 7-5..otherwise..it's not haiku...it'sfreewrite, short prose, or stream
> of conciousness poetry...
>
> Christopher
>
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> From: tomáz <[EMAIL PROTECTED
follow the 5-7-5
syllable formula.
Just my poetic tuppenyworth.
Philip
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From: Christopher J Mulder <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
To: <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Sent: 27 February 2002 17:06
Subject: FLUXLIST: Haiku after Arguelles (A replyification)
I suppose..but poetry ha
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From: tomáz <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Date: Tuesday, February 26, 2002 3:16 pm
Subject: Re: FLUXLIST: Haiku after Arguelles
>
> i cannot say that i am overwhelmed by the haiku's,
> i know too little about it either,
> but at some point, couldn't you
> argue that a t
i cannot say that i am overwhelmed by the haiku's,
i know too little about it either,
but at some point, couldn't you
argue that a technically bad haiku, may well still be a haiku?
Christopher J Mulder <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
John Bennett,Maybe I'm overstepping my bounds or am missing som
John Bennett,
Maybe I'm overstepping my bounds or am missing something..but your
haiku's...should be in syllables of 5-7-5...your's are not...Am I
misreading them?...Help me out.
CHRIS MULDER
ARtist - ARTeest - Artust
Haw
Pal lid siestas in yr dis
tance cup a
d y awn emergent, marginless root
Red
Scheme shoes, blank algae "I
see" dat a text
turgid hoof aches "waste futurities"
Litmus
Bit pistol mop, tossed her
melting in the
chalk members melting "flirt intuit"
Serpent
Mounds immersion vomits, redder
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