Re: Review of a handbook patch

2018-07-31 Thread Rocky Hotas
Hi! > Sent: Friday, July 27, 2018 at 2:21 AM > From: "Benjamin Kaduk" > To: "Rocky Hotas" > Cc: d...@freebsd.org > Subject: Re: Review of a handbook patch [...] > Hopefully this helps. Thank you for submitting the patch and updating it > so much,

Re: Review of a handbook patch

2018-07-26 Thread Benjamin Kaduk
On Thu, Jul 19, 2018 at 08:43:17PM +0200, Rocky Hotas wrote: > Hi! > This is about the review: > > https://reviews.freebsd.org/D10600 > (patch to LDAP section of the FreeBSD Handbook) > > I wrote the text as a newbie, enthusiast user who tried to install an > OpenLDAP server, found some difficult

Review of a handbook patch

2018-07-19 Thread Rocky Hotas
Hi! This is about the review: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D10600 (patch to LDAP section of the FreeBSD Handbook) I wrote the text as a newbie, enthusiast user who tried to install an OpenLDAP server, found some difficulties, and wanted to contribute. The style was naive and needed several correc