[Gen-art] draft-ietf-mpls-oam-requirements-07.txt

2005-11-28 Thread Thomas D. Nadeau
Please update draft-ietf-mpls-oam-requirements-06.txt with this document. Please update the MPLS web page as well. This draft is being published to make updates based on IESG GEN-ART change requests, which have been reviewed and approved. Network Working Group Tho

[Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART review of MPLS OAM Requirements and Framework Drafts

2005-11-28 Thread Thomas D. Nadeau
Ahh, missed that one. Just corrected and sent the revision to the I-D editor after running it through ID-nits. Ball is in your court IESG. --Tom Tom, These changes are fine, and address everything except changing the title of Section 4.11.2 . Thanks, --David ---

[Gen-art] GEN-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-subid-00.txt

2005-11-28 Thread Scott W Brim
(If you don't know about the General Area Review Team, please ask. The FAQ isn't done yet.) This draft is ready for publication as a proposed standard. Ship it. ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

[Gen-art] RE: Gen-ART review of MPLS OAM Requirements and Framework Drafts

2005-11-28 Thread Black_David
Tom, These changes are fine, and address everything except changing the title of Section 4.11.2 . Thanks, --David David L. Black, Senior Technologist EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (50

[Gen-art] GenART review of draft-ietf-sigtran-rfc3332bis-05.txt

2005-11-28 Thread Black_David
This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC The -04 version of this draft was GenART reviewed for IETF Last Call. That review is forwarded below. With the exception of splitting of figures across pages (which the RFC Editor can readily deal with), the concerns raised by that re

[Gen-art] *FINAL* Assignments for Dec 1st, 2005

2005-11-28 Thread Mary Barnes
Here's the final assignments for Dec 1st based on the agenda as of this morning: http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/reviewers-051201-revised.html Note, that 3 drafts have been removed from the agenda - the geopriv-dhcp-civil, the eastlake-mime and enum-voice. I've just moved them out to the n

[Gen-art] RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-ddns-resolution and draft-ietf-dnsext-dhcid-rr

2005-11-28 Thread Harald Tveit Alvestrand
--On mandag, november 28, 2005 10:49:35 -0500 "Bernie Volz (volz)" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: For DHCPv4, all three forms could be used (once draft-ietf-dhc-3315id-for-v4-05.txt is an RFC and implementations support it). However, the DHCPv4 server knows which format to use as it is using th

[Gen-art] RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-ddns-resolution and draft-ietf-dnsext-dhcid-rr

2005-11-28 Thread Bernie Volz \(volz\)
Harald: > The problem is simple: The document gives three ways in which a DHCID RR > can be created based on data from a client request. Section 3.4 does not > specify which of the three to choose. I don't believe this is a problem. For DHCPv6, there is only the DUID that can be used. So, ther

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-ddns-resolution and draft-ietf-dnsext-dhcid-rr

2005-11-28 Thread Harald Tveit Alvestrand
Documents: draft-ietf-dhc-ddns-resolution-10.txt draft-ietf-dnsext-dhcid-rr-10.txt Reviewer: Harald Alvestrand Date: Nov 28, 2005 Summary: Not ready. Technical issues. The DDNS resolution document seems to be technically competent, and give a reasonable procedure for detecting conflict

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-fqdn and draft-ietf-dhc-fqdn-option

2005-11-28 Thread Harald Tveit Alvestrand
NOTE: The total review request was for four documents. I am breaking it up into two reviews: One for the two DHCP options and one for the conflict resolution procedure. Document: draft-ietf-dhc-fqdn-option-11.txt draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-fqdn-03.txt Reviewer: Harald Alvestrand Date: Nov 2

Re: [Gen-art] Updating and publishing the Gen-ART FAQ list

2005-11-28 Thread Scott W Brim
On Mon, Nov 28, 2005 07:09:24AM -0600, Spencer Dawkins allegedly wrote: > p.s. JohnL used the most current FAQ text available, but it still had a > couple of needed changes reflecting Scott Brim's note to the list. I've > made the edits reflecting Scott's comments, and note that Brian still needs

[Gen-art] Updating and publishing the Gen-ART FAQ list

2005-11-28 Thread Spencer Dawkins
I noticed (and I may not have been the only one) about a month ago that we Gen-ART reviewers are starting to assume that Gen-ART is fairly widely understood (to the point of saying things like "everybody knows about Gen-ART, right?"), but Gen-ART has never been presented to the IETF community a

[Gen-art] Re: Gen art review: draft-melnikov-imap-ext-abnf-05.txt

2005-11-28 Thread Alexey Melnikov
Elwyn Davies wrote: Background for those on the CC list, who may be unaware of GenART: GenART is the Area Review Team for the General Area of the IETF. We advise the General Area Director (i.e. the IETF/IESG chair) by providing more in depth reviews than he could do himself of documents tha

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-avt-uncomp-video-ext-01.txt

2005-11-28 Thread john . loughney
Hi all, My IETF LC review of RTP Payload Format for Uncompressed Video: Additional Colour Sampling Modes (draft-ietf-avt-uncomp-video-ext-01.txt). This is a short, simple draft - its ready to go, IMO. One small comment is that the Abstract is one sentence - I'd suggest to expand what "additional

[Gen-art] GENART review of Definitions of Managed Objects for FCIP

2005-11-28 Thread john . loughney
Hi all, Here is my GENART review of Definitions of Managed Objects for FCIP. See footer for info about Gen-ART if you are confused. This document is basically ready, except for 2 nits. Note that I am not a FC nor a MIB expert, so I am assuming the MIB doctors did their job & the WG did their job