[Gen-art] gen-art review of draft-ietf-mediactrl-requirements-03.txt

2008-01-21 Thread Scott Brim
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document:

[Gen-art] gen-art review of draft-ietf-mediactrl-requirements-03.txt

2008-01-21 Thread Scott Brim
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document:

[Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-psamp-framework-12

2008-01-21 Thread Ben Campbell
Hi, sorry for the delayed response. Comments inline. (If I don't comment on something, please consider this an okay). On Jan 16, 2008, at 5:09 AM, Benoit Claise wrote: Hi Ben, Thanks for your review. See inline. I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for

[Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-psamp-framework-12

2008-01-21 Thread Ben Campbell
On Jan 16, 2008, at 9:24 AM, DUFFIELD, NICHOLAS G (NICK) wrote: Benoit: thanks. I can incorporate your proposed changes into the draft. Ben: please let us know if you have any further feedback on Benoit’s proposed changes. Only minor--please see my separate email to Benoit. [...]