Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-nfsdirect-07.txt

2008-04-16 Thread Talpey, Thomas
At 11:57 AM 3/21/2008, Francis Dupont wrote: >I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) >reviewer for this draft >... >Editorial: > - 3 page 3, etc: about the case of read/write: operations should get > all uppercase, list only the first letter and other all lowercase. > In t

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-rserpool-asap-19.txt

2008-04-16 Thread Spencer Dawkins
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-rserpo

Re: [Gen-art] [lemonade] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-lemonade-convert-17.txt

2008-04-16 Thread Black_David
Alexey, Thank you for your prompt response. Keeping the To: and Subject: lines in the IANA registration in Section 11.1 is fine since they are in RFC 2506, and RFC 2506 is noted in that section as having established the registry. Please consider adding an informative reference to RFC 2506, but t

Re: [Gen-art] [lemonade] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-lemonade-convert-17.txt

2008-04-16 Thread Alexey Melnikov
[EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: >I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) >reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see >http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). > >Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments >you may re

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-mip6-hiopt-13

2008-04-16 Thread Alfred Hönes
At 16 Apr 2008 12:52:00 +0300, Jari Arkko <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Alfred, thanks for your review. The stuff that you sent me seems to be > things that we need to fix. Please prepare a report and send it to > Heejin. Heejin, please wait for Alfred's fixes before you submit the -14. > > Jari

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-Art IETF LC review: draft-ietf-ipfix-testing-04.txt

2008-04-16 Thread Benoit Claise
Dear Joel, I posted a new version of the testing draft A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-ipfix-testing-05.txt has been successfuly submitted by Benoit Claise and posted to the IETF repository. Filename: draft-ietf-ipfix-testing Revision: 05 Title:Guidelines f