Re: [Gen-art] gen-art review of draft-ietf-avt-rtp-atrac-family-16.txt

2008-07-14 Thread actech
Hi all, Most of the issues that Scott pointed out are specific and clear. We hope we will update the draft and submit it in soon. Any other comments or advise are very helpful to us, of course. Regards, Matsumoto I think Scott has raised some issues here that should be addressed. Can folks sor

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-manner-router-alert-iana-03.txt

2008-07-14 Thread Jari Arkko
I agree with what Brian says. I have placed an RFC Editor note to move the reference. If there are other things to take care of during the IESG and IETF Last Call reviews, the authors can take care of this in the new document revision. If there are no other things, the RFC Editor note suffices

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-xro-05.txt

2008-07-14 Thread Vijay K. Gurbani
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document:

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-opsawg-snmp-engineid-discovery-02.txt

2008-07-14 Thread Brian E Carpenter
FWIW I'm happy with the text in the -03 draft; not quite what I originally expected, but completely logical. Thanks Brian On 2008-06-27 05:56, Randy Presuhn wrote: > Hi - > >> From: "Juergen Schoenwaelder" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> >> To: "David Harrington" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> >> Cc: "'Randy Presuh

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-manner-router-alert-iana-03.txt

2008-07-14 Thread Brian E Carpenter
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-manner-

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-capwap-dhc-ac-option-01.txt

2008-07-14 Thread Scott Brim
On 7/14/08 12:18 PM, Pat Calhoun (pacalhou) allegedly wrote: Darn - and all this time as a Canadian I assumed we spelled it the same way as Americans :) I'll fix it up. PatC A Canadian once told me that in school they told him he could spell any way he liked as long as he was consistent, an

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-capwap-dhc-ac-option-01.txt

2008-07-14 Thread Pat Calhoun (pacalhou)
Darn - and all this time as a Canadian I assumed we spelled it the same way as Americans :) I'll fix it up. PatC -Original Message- From: Scott Brim [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Sent: Saturday, July 12, 2008 6:31 AM To: Pat Calhoun (pacalhou) Cc: [EMAIL PROTECTED]; gen-art@ietf.org; [EMAI