Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-mpls-number-0-bw-te-lsps-11

2008-08-22 Thread Ben Campbell
Sorry, my subject was misleading--this is a Gen-ART telechat review, not a LC review. Thanks, Ben. On Aug 22, 2008, at 5:24 PM, Ben Campbell wrote: I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvest

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-mpls-number-0-bw-te-lsps-11

2008-08-22 Thread Ben Campbell
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document:

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-guidelines-09

2008-08-22 Thread Ben Campbell
Hi, The discussion so far and the proposed revisions address all of my comments. Thanks! Ben. On Aug 22, 2008, at 1:31 PM, Lars Eggert wrote: Hi, On 2008-8-22, at 11:16, ext Ben Campbell wrote: Section 3.1.2, paragraph 1: Should I take this to mean that implementing TFRC is insufficien

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-guidelines-09

2008-08-22 Thread Lars Eggert
Hi, On 2008-8-22, at 11:16, ext Ben Campbell wrote: Section 3.1.2, paragraph 1: Should I take this to mean that implementing TFRC is insufficient for low-volume applications, and that they should follow the guidelines in this section even if they implement TFRC? If so, this conflicts with

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-guidelines-09

2008-08-22 Thread Ben Campbell
On Aug 21, 2008, at 9:32 PM, Lars Eggert wrote: Hi, thanks for your comments! On 2008-8-12, at 15:27, ext Ben Campbell wrote: Section 3.1.1, paragraph 3: I think this paragraph may be confusing to some implementors, in that you suggest monitoring packet-loss to determine fair bandwidth

[Gen-art] gen-art review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcsec-gss-v2-05.txt

2008-08-22 Thread Scott Brim
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html ). Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcsec-gss-v2-05.txt Reviewer: Scott Brim Review Date: 22 Aug 2008