Re: [Gen-art] Assignments for June 18, 2009 Telechat

2009-06-16 Thread Mary Barnes
Hi all, I have uploaded all the reviews received to date along with the updated s/s. Please let me know if there are any errors or omissions. Thanks, Mary. _ From: Barnes, Mary (RICH2:AR00) Sent: Thursday, June 11, 2009 9:27 PM To: General

Re: [Gen-art] [PWE3] gen-art review of draft-ietf-pwe3-ms-pw-arch-06.txt

2009-06-16 Thread Scott Brim
BOCCI Matthew allegedly wrote on 06/16/2009 10:40 AM: > Scott, > > Many thanks for your review. Matthew and all: Thanks for your excellent handling of this. I'm very happy. ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinf

Re: [Gen-art] [PWE3] gen-art review of draft-ietf-pwe3-ms-pw-arch-06.txt

2009-06-16 Thread Andrew G. Malis
Stewart, I guess following precedent is the path of least resistance. Cheers, Andy On Tue, Jun 16, 2009 at 11:11 AM, Stewart Bryant wrote: > Andrew G. Malis wrote: >> >> While I completely agree with Matthew's edits, do informative RFCs >> normally have normative references? None of the text is

Re: [Gen-art] [PWE3] gen-art review of draft-ietf-pwe3-ms-pw-arch-06.txt

2009-06-16 Thread Stewart Bryant
Andrew G. Malis wrote: While I completely agree with Matthew's edits, do informative RFCs normally have normative references? None of the text is normative Cheers, Andy That was my first reaction when I saw Scott's comment, but we (the editors) looked for a definitive guide and could n

Re: [Gen-art] [PWE3] gen-art review of draft-ietf-pwe3-ms-pw-arch-06.txt

2009-06-16 Thread Andrew G. Malis
While I completely agree with Matthew's edits, do informative RFCs normally have normative references? None of the text is normative Cheers, Andy On Tue, Jun 16, 2009 at 10:40 AM, BOCCI Matthew wrote: > Scott, > > Many thanks for your review. > >> -Original Message- > > [snip] > >> >

Re: [Gen-art] [PWE3] gen-art review of draft-ietf-pwe3-ms-pw-arch-06.txt

2009-06-16 Thread BOCCI Matthew
Scott, Many thanks for your review. > -Original Message- [snip] > > Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC. > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > > - In this one paragraph: > > Note that although Figure 4 only shows a