Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review ofdraft-ietf-pcn-marking-behaviour-03.txt

2009-06-19 Thread Black_David
Philip, These suggested changes look fine, and I like Michael Menth's idea of rephrasing the text to discuss "reference rates of the meters and markers" instead of "PCN-excess-rate". Thanks, --David > -Original Message- > From: gen-art-boun...@ietf.org > [mailto:gen-art-boun...@ietf.o

Re: [Gen-art] [PCN] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcn-marking-behaviour-03.txt

2009-06-19 Thread Michael Menth
Hi Phil, hi David, philip.eard...@bt.com schrieb: { "PCN-excess-rate" strikes me as a bad name for a configured { throughput rate - I suggest choosing another term. To be honest, I think it's too late to change it, as it's defined/used in the PCN architecture doc, which has just become RFC555

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-ancp-security-threats-07.txt

2009-06-19 Thread Joel M. Halpern
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html ). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ancp

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcn-marking-behaviour-03.txt

2009-06-19 Thread philip.eardley
David, Thanks for your review & comments. { The implementation notes are very useful - the WG should be { commended for working through the practical implementation { considerations for this functionality up front as opposed to { leaving them to implementers to puzzle out. Thanks! { "PCN-excess-r