I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document:
Hi Spencer,
Thanks for your review - I was on vacation last week so I am only getting
around to replying now.
--On August 7, 2009 6:36:41 AM -0500 Spencer Dawkins
spen...@wonderhamster.org wrote:
Comments identified as Spencer (clarity) are provided for editors, but
are not part of the
On Aug 16, 2009, at 11:01 AM, Ned Freed wrote:
[...]
it would be helpful to have a sentence or two somewhere (maybe
in the intro) to explicitly say so. My confusion might be around the
meaning of the term client in this context.
No, I think your confusion is that you read a lot more into
Russ - would you be willing to clear your DISCUSS and capture Joel's
new issues in a COMMENT?
- Ralph
On Jul 27, 2009, at 4:56 AM 7/27/09, Joel M. Halpern wrote:
This document is nearly ready for publication as an Informational RFC.
While my comments have been resolved, some minor issues
On Aug 16, 2009, at 11:01 AM, Ned Freed wrote:
[...]
it would be helpful to have a sentence or two somewhere (maybe
in the intro) to explicitly say so. My confusion might be around the
meaning of the term client in this context.
No, I think your confusion is that you read a lot more
