Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-krb-wg-cross-problem-statement-04.txt

Hi Tim, >> Just to note that the RFC Editor will have to make many grammatical >> corrections to this draft. > > Now, we are making effort to improve text. I am ready to send new version of the draft that has been with grammatical corrections. According to the GEN-ART FAQ (www.alvestrand.no/ie

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pmol-sip-perf-metrics-03.txt

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-pmol-sip-perf-metrics-03.txt For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: This draft ha

[Gen-art] Gen Art review odraft-ietf-ippm-multimetrics-11

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Document: draft-ietf-ippm-multimetrics-11 Reviewer: Avshalom Houri Review Date: 2009-08-19 IETF L

Re: [Gen-art] draft-ietf-ntp-autokey-06.txt

Ralph: Russ - would you be willing to clear your DISCUSS and capture Joel's new issues in a COMMENT? - Ralph On Jul 27, 2009, at 4:56 AM 7/27/09, Joel M. Halpern wrote: This document is nearly ready for publication as an Informational RFC. While my comments have been resolved, some minor is

[Gen-art] Gen Art review of draft-zorn-radius-pkmv1-05

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Document: draft-zorn-radius-pkmv1-05 Reviewer: Avshalom Houri Review Date: 2009-08-19 IETF LC End

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-dime-nai-routing-02

Hi Pete, I have updated the I-D based on your comments. The -03 version should be available readily in draft repositories. Cheers, Jouni On Aug 4, 2009, at 8:41 PM, McCann Peter-A001034 wrote: Hi, Jouni, Thanks, I went back and re-read Section 2.8 of RFC 3588 and refreshed my un