Re: [Gen-art] re-review of draft-ietf-mipshop-pfmipv6-11.txt

2009-12-03 Thread Hidetoshi Yokota
Hello Francis, Now I see what gave you a pain... A series of unfamiliar abbreviations may hamper readability. Please take a look at the following style. The key words below are spelled out: MN -> mobile node P/N-AN -> previous/new access network P/NMAG-> previous/new MAG etc. If the revised styl

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-rohc-rfc4995bis-01.txt

2009-12-03 Thread Kristofer Sandlund
Hi, thanks for the review. I discussed this briefly with Ghyslain and we agree with your comments. Regarding the interop-difference from 4995, we'll add a sentence to the introduction as suggested. Is it sufficient to update both this and the IANA allocation during AUTH48 as we will anyway updat

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-sasl-gs2-18

2009-12-03 Thread Nicolas Williams
On Thu, Dec 03, 2009 at 07:02:53PM +, Alexey Melnikov wrote: > Hi Nico, > > Nicolas Williams wrote: > > >>13.3. Additional Recommendations > >> > >> If the application requires security layers then it MUST prefer the > >> SASL "GSSAPI" mechanism over "GS2-KRB5" or "GS2-KRB5-PLUS". > >> > >>S

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-sasl-gs2-18

2009-12-03 Thread Alexey Melnikov
Hi Nico, Nicolas Williams wrote: 13.3. Additional Recommendations If the application requires security layers then it MUST prefer the SASL "GSSAPI" mechanism over "GS2-KRB5" or "GS2-KRB5-PLUS". Spencer (minor): If "prefer the mechanism" is the right way to describe this, I apologize, but

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-sasl-gs2-18

2009-12-03 Thread Nicolas Williams
Thanks for your review. On Mon, Nov 30, 2009 at 03:19:04PM -0500, Spencer Dawkins wrote: > 1. Introduction > > The GS1 bridge failed to gain wide deployment for any GSS-API > mechanism other than The "Kerberos V5 GSS-API mechanism" [RFC1964] > > Spencer (nit): s/The "Kerberos/"The Kerberos/

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-rohc-rfc4995bis-01.txt

2009-12-03 Thread Magnus Westerlund
Hi Authors, I think it is best that you submit a new version. Otherwise you will get comments on this also from IESG members. That will consume more time than what submitting a new version will take. /Magnus Kristofer Sandlund skrev: > Hi, > > thanks for the review. I discussed this briefly wit