Re: [Gen-art] Mail regarding draft-ietf-opsawg-mpls-tp-oam-def

2011-05-10 Thread Scott Brim
Much better. I have one very small suggestion: in the very last paragraph, the one about Mgmt, is the last sentence relevant? It would feel better to me just to stop with This document does not define Management.. But that's aesthetics -- IMHO this version is much better and my comments are

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-vrrp-unified-mib-09

2011-05-10 Thread Ben Campbell
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-vrrp-unified-mib-09 Reviewer:

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-vrrp-unified-mib-09

2011-05-10 Thread Ben Campbell
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[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-options-registry-01.txt

2011-05-10 Thread Brian E Carpenter
Please see attached review. I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: