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Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20110723
IETF LC End Date: 20110720
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Not Ready

Major issues: 4.1 page 13 explains the use of ICMP in Traceroute: this
is plainly wrong: ICMP can't be used in this way because no ICMP error
can be triggered by an ICMP. BTW:
 - traceroute uses UDP probes just for this reason
 - I put this as a major issue because this must not be published in
  a document from the IETF

Regards

francis.dup...@fdupont.fr

PS: I stopped the review at this point but I'll resume and send a full
review ASAP (I like the document, OAM is something really useful and
to try to organize it a great idea).
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