Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pcn-sm-edge-behaviour-08

2012-01-13 Thread David Harrington
Hi Tom, If you change this to Experimental, then the Intro should have a discussion of the experiment, including some guidance about how to judge success. The current IESG has been a stickler on that point. dbh > -Original Message- > From: Tom Taylor [mailto:tom111.tay...@bell.net] > S

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-kitten-sasl-saml-08

2012-01-13 Thread Ben Campbell
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-kitten-sasl-s

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-kompella-l2vpn-l2vpn-07

2012-01-13 Thread Roni Even
Hi, I am OK with minor issue 2 now. Issue 3 was my only point Roni > -Original Message- > From: Kireeti Kompella [mailto:kire...@juniper.net] > Sent: Friday, January 13, 2012 7:36 PM > To: Roni Even > Cc: Kireeti Kompella; draft-kompella-l2vpn-l2vpn@tools.ietf.org; > gen-art@ietf.org

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-kompella-l2vpn-l2vpn-07

2012-01-13 Thread Kireeti Kompella
On Jan 12, 2012, at 23:16 , Roni Even wrote: > Hi, > I looked at the 08 version and the major issues are addressed. > What about minor issue number 3? Good point! I will fix (as Stewart suggests, maybe just remove the reference). To your minor issue (2), I've clarified the structure. Do you st

Re: [Gen-art] [sieve] Gen-ART Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sieve-include-13

2012-01-13 Thread Ben Campbell
On Jan 13, 2012, at 9:13 AM, Barry Leiba wrote: […] > > I think this isn't a protocol requirement, but a > quality-of-implementation issue. But I do think the document could > have a paragraph discussing this, and warning of the consequences. I concur that this is not so much a protocol issue

Re: [Gen-art] [sieve] Gen-ART Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sieve-include-13

2012-01-13 Thread Barry Leiba
>>> -- section 3.1, paragraph 4: "Implementations MUST NOT generate errors for >>> recursive inclusions at upload time, as this would force an upload ordering >>> requirement upon script authors / generators.  However, if an active script >>> is replaced with a faulty script and would remain the ac