Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review:draft-ietf-netext-pmip-lr-08.txt

Hi Mary, Thanks for your review and comments. Please find responses inline. On 02/24/2012 04:42 PM, Mary Barnes wrote: - Section 4: -- Text after Figure 2 (before section 4.1). There is no normative language in these paragraphs. --- For example in the first paragraph, I would expect that the

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-decade-problem-statement-05.txt

Hi Francis, Thank you very much for the Gen-ART review. The nits will be resolved before publication. BR, -Haibin (as individual) -Original Message- From: francis.dup...@fdupont.fr [mailto:francis.dup...@fdupont.fr] Sent: Monday, February 27, 2012 1:17 AM To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc:

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-base-23

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[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-l3vpn-mvpn-wildcards-02.txt

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-l3vpn-mvpn-wildcards-02.txt For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: This draft is

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-manet-packetbb-sec-08

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Document: draft-ietf-manet-packetbb-sec-08 Reviewer: Wassim Haddad Review Date: 27 Feb 2012 IETF LC End Date: 02/27/2012 IESG Telechat