Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-pbb-vpls-interop-05

Hi Ali, Those changes would resolve my comments. Thanks! Ben. On Oct 8, 2013, at 5:13 PM, Ali Sajassi (sajassi) wrote: > > Ben, > > Thanks for your comments. I have incorporated all your comments in rev06 > of this draft. > > > On 9/23/13 1:29 PM, "Ben Campbell" wrote: > >> I am the as

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-pbb-vpls-interop-05

Ben, Thanks for your comments. I have incorporated all your comments in rev06 of this draft. On 9/23/13 1:29 PM, "Ben Campbell" wrote: >I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > >

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-intarea-flow-label-balancing-02

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[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-06

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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-intarea-flow-label-balancing-01

Hi Brian, thank's for the response. A couple of comments below; I've removed sections that do not appear to need further comment. On Oct 6, 2013, at 4:51 PM, Brian E Carpenter wrote: [...] > >> -- section 3, first bullet list item: >> >> Is it worth mentioning SRV here? > > I don't think so

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-worley-service-example-13.txt

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