[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-p2psip-service-discovery-14

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewerfor this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document:

Re: [Gen-art] [websec] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-websec-key-pinning-19

These fixes are now available in a new version. You can see the changes at: https://code.google.com/p/key-pinning-draft/source/list On Mon, Aug 4, 2014 at 8:49 AM, Yoav Nir wrote: > [ with no hats on ] > > inline > > On Jul 31, 2014, at 10:27 PM, Yoav Nir wrote: >> On Jul 31, 2014, at 4:05 PM,

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-etree-frwk-07

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-etree-f

Re: [Gen-art] [websec] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-websec-key-pinning-19

comments inline On 04/08/14 16:49, Yoav Nir wrote: > [ with no hats on ] > > inline > > On Jul 31, 2014, at 10:27 PM, Yoav Nir wrote: >> On Jul 31, 2014, at 4:05 PM, Elwyn Davies wrote: >> >>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >>> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ a

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-etree-frwk-06

Hi Lucy, I apologize for the late response. I somehow missed your mail when it came in originally. Comments inline. I've deleted sections where I don't have further comment. Thanks! Ben. On Jul 15, 2014, at 3:18 PM, Lucy yong wrote: > [...] > -- I suggest removing the 2119 language. Ignor

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-6man-multicast-addr-arch-update-07

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[Gen-art] Genart LC review: draft-ietf-conex-abstract-mech-12

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-conex-abstract-mech-12 Revie

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-trill-loss-delay-05

Hi Alexey, These changes have been made a new version -06 has been posted. Thanks, Donald = Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA d3e...@gmail.com On Mon, Aug 4, 2014 at 1:19 PM, Alexey Melnikov wrote: > On 04/08