[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-weirds-object-inventory-05

2014-10-20 Thread Ben Campbell
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-weirds-object-inventory-05

Re: [Gen-art] [Softwires] Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-softwire-lw4over6-10

2014-10-20 Thread Ted Lemon
On Oct 20, 2014, at 9:43 AM, Black, David wrote: > Whether adding an informative mention of the YANG model rises to the level of > "required" would be up to the OPS ADs. It may help implementers find the YANG > model, which could be useful. The problem with this is that the informative reference

Re: [Gen-art] [Softwires] Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-softwire-lw4over6-10

2014-10-20 Thread Black, David
Hello Qi, > I'm feeling it's not necessary for such a specification to reference the YANG > model document. The current lw4o6 specification does work without this > management YANG model doc. I think the OA&M should be out of the scope for > this protocol specification. And, I checked the RFC6333,

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-weirds-rdap-sec-09

2014-10-20 Thread Hollenbeck, Scott
Thanks for the comments, Christer. More below. Scott From: Christer Holmberg [mailto:christer.holmb...@ericsson.com] Sent: Sunday, October 19, 2014 7:46 PM To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-weirds-rdap-sec@tools.ietf.org Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-weirds-rdap-sec-09 (Re-send wi

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review for draft-ietf-weirds-json-response-10

2014-10-20 Thread Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-weirds-json-response-

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-weirds-rdap-query-15

2014-10-20 Thread Hollenbeck, Scott
> -Original Message- > From: Brian E Carpenter [mailto:brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com] > Sent: Sunday, October 19, 2014 8:10 PM > To: draft-ietf-weirds-rdap-query@tools.ietf.org; General Area > Review Team > Subject: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-weirds-rdap-query-15 > > I am the