[Gen-art] review of draft-kivinen-ipsecme-oob-pubkey-11.txt

2015-09-14 Thread Francis Dupont
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Re: [Gen-art] [Dtls-iot] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dice-profile-14

2015-09-14 Thread Stephen Farrell
Hi Brian, Hannes, On 08/09/15 20:24, Hannes Tschofenig wrote: >> > The downref to RFC7251 was not mentioned in the last call and that RFC >> > isn't >> > in the downref registry. ((Yes, I've been in the IESG and I know how >> > annoying this can be, but it's a process glitch.)) >> > > Thanks

[Gen-art] Gen-art Telechat review: draft-mm-netconf-time-capability-08

2015-09-14 Thread Robert Sparks
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Re: [Gen-art] [Dtls-iot] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dice-profile-14

2015-09-14 Thread Brian E Carpenter
On 15/09/2015 01:27, Stephen Farrell wrote: > > Hi Brian, Hannes, > > On 08/09/15 20:24, Hannes Tschofenig wrote: The downref to RFC7251 was not mentioned in the last call and that RFC isn't in the downref registry. ((Yes, I've been in the IESG and I know how annoying this

[Gen-art] Gen-art Telechat review: draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-lambda-label-05

2015-09-14 Thread Robert Sparks
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Re: [Gen-art] [Dtls-iot] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dice-profile-14

2015-09-14 Thread Stephen Farrell
On 14/09/15 21:10, Brian E Carpenter wrote: > I promise not to appeal. The downref rules are quite creaky and annoying, > so I'd support them being overhauled anyway, as long as egregious downrefs > can still be prevented or appealed. Yep. Anything can always be appealed of course, and ID nits

[Gen-art] Genart Telechat review: draft-ietf-pcp-anycast-07

2015-09-14 Thread Robert Sparks
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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-terminology-04

2015-09-14 Thread Paul Hoffman
On 11 Sep 2015, at 13:45, Black, David wrote: The -04 version of this draft addresses most of the concerns noted in the Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of the -03 version. In particular, both of the major process-related issues have been addressed by retargeting the draft to be an Informational