Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-pwe3-iccp-stp-04

2015-09-16 Thread Mingui Zhang
Hi Brian, Thanks for your careful review! Please see my responses in-line below. > -Original Message- > From: Brian E Carpenter [mailto:brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com] > Sent: Tuesday, September 15, 2015 9:18 AM > To: draft-ietf-pwe3-iccp-stp@ietf.org; General Area Review Team > Subject

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art Telechat review: draft-mm-netconf-time-capability-08

2015-09-16 Thread Robert Sparks
Sorry - I didn't pick that up when I looked at the graphic -05 to -08 diff. This text is ok, especially given (ii). RjS On 9/16/15 1:29 AM, Tal Mizrahi wrote: Hi Robert, > The document doesn't reflect the email discussion we had around how > certain 3rd parties can cancel commands. I encoura

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34.txt

2015-09-16 Thread Randall Gellens
I've addressed all of Francis' comments (which I appreciate) and also reviewed all lowercase instances of the key words. At 2:03 PM +0200 9/3/15, Jari Arkko wrote: Thanks for your review, Francis! Can the authors check the comments? Thanks. With regards to RFC 2119 keywords, if I understa

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34.txt

2015-09-16 Thread Randall Gellens
Hi Francis, Thanks for your review. Please see in-line. At 12:19 PM +0200 9/2/15, Francis Dupont wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these c

Re: [Gen-art] Hi, Gen-art Telechat review of draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-node-protection-06 - follow up

2015-09-16 Thread IJsbrand Wijnands
Thanks Elwyn! Ice. > On 16 Sep 2015, at 15:32, Elwyn Davies wrote: > > Hi Ice. > > I had a quick look through the updates in -07 and that has addressed all the > points below. Definitely good to go now. > > Cheers, > Elwyn > >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General

Re: [Gen-art] Hi, Gen-art Telechat review of draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-node-protection-06 - follow up

2015-09-16 Thread Elwyn Davies
Hi Ice. I had a quick look through the updates in -07 and that has addressed all the points below. Definitely good to go now. Cheers, Elwyn I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for th

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-pseudonode-nickname-05

2015-09-16 Thread Donald Eastlake
See below: On Fri, Sep 11, 2015 at 12:17 PM, Russ Housley wrote: > Donald: > Document: draft-ietf-trill-pseudonode-nickname-05 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2015-08-24 IETF LC End Date: 2015-09-01 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Almost Ready