[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment-id-10

2015-10-16 Thread Meral Shirazipour
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[Gen-art] Gen-art LC review: draft-ietf-pals-redundancy-spe-02

2015-10-16 Thread Robert Sparks
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Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-mac-wd

2015-10-16 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
Hi, Himanshu - responses in line... > On Oct 15, 2015, at 7:44 PM 10/15/15, Shah, Himanshu wrote: > > Hi Ralph - > Thanks for your thorough review. > > Let me first address your major concern. > > As you point out, this draft builds on existing standards. > We (authors and

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC/Telechat review of draft-ietf-pals-ms-pw-protection-03

2015-10-16 Thread Andrew G. Malis
Peter, Many thanks for your review. My response is inline: On Fri, Oct 16, 2015 at 4:07 AM, Peter Yee wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for > the IETF

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC/Telechat review of draft-ietf-pals-ms-pw-protection-03

2015-10-16 Thread Andrew G. Malis
Peter, Thanks again, I'll take of those acronyms. Cheers, Andy On Fri, Oct 16, 2015 at 4:49 PM, Peter Yee wrote: > Andrew, > > > > Regarding Appendix A, that may just be my lack of deep > understanding for the MPLS-TP world. If you feel the differentiation

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC/Telechat review of draft-ietf-pals-ms-pw-protection-03

2015-10-16 Thread Peter Yee
Andrew, Regarding Appendix A, that may just be my lack of deep understanding for the MPLS-TP world. If you feel the differentiation is covered, leave it as is. Acronyms that might merit expansion include PE (as used in T-PE and S-PE), PSN (one meaning is

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-aqm-ecn-benefits-06

2015-10-16 Thread Paul Kyzivat
I forgot to copy gen-art. Forwarded Message Subject: Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-aqm-ecn-benefits-06 Date: Fri, 16 Oct 2015 11:58:48 -0400 From: Paul Kyzivat To: draft-ietf-aqm-ecn-benefits@ietf.org (Unchanged from LC review.) I am the

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-homenet-dncp-11

2015-10-16 Thread Meral Shirazipour
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information,

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment-id-10

2015-10-16 Thread Fernando Gont
Hi, Meral, Thanks so much for your feedback! Please find my comments in-line... On 10/16/2015 07:07 PM, Meral Shirazipour wrote: [] > > Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC. > []> > > Nits/editorial comments: > > [Page 7], "that needs to

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment-id-10

2015-10-16 Thread Meral Shirazipour
Hi, Thank you. Best, Meral > -Original Message- > From: Fernando Gont [mailto:fg...@si6networks.com] > Sent: Friday, October 16, 2015 3:20 PM > To: Meral Shirazipour; draft-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment- > id@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org > Subject: Re: Gen-ART Telechat Call