Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-josefsson-scrypt-kdf-03

Executive Summary: I have submitted https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-josefsson-scrypt-kdf-04 that (hopefully) resolve the gen-art and secdir feedback. Paul Kyzivat writes: > This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the > review. Hello Paul. I

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-qname-minimisation-07

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-dnsop-qname-minimisation-07.txt. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document:

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-josefsson-scrypt-kdf-03

On 11/20/15 10:22 AM, Stephen Farrell wrote: (This combines the distributions for Simon's mail to gen-art and secdir. I think one thread responding to my question(s) below will work better.) +1 I was out of my depth reviewing this because I am not familiar with common practice in defining

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-josefsson-scrypt-kdf-03

I did want to comment on one other thing: >>> (Issue-4): Identifiers reused for different meanings In scrypt, "B" is an array of "p" vectors, each of which is 128*r octets. In scryptROMix, "B" is a single vector of 128*r octets. In scryptBlockMix, "B" is a vector of 2*r 64-octet blocks. I'm

[Gen-art] Gem-Art Last Call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-qname-minimisation-07

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-dnsop-qname-minimisation-07.txt. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document:

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-manet-olsrv2-dat-metric-08

[In progress - not ready for sending] I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information,

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art Last Call/Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ipfix-mib-variable-export-09

Hi Elwyn, Many thanks for the review, agree this one is a little dry :-) Please see below for the replies to your comments. The changes have been made for draft 10. PJ: Paul Aitken CM: Colin McDowall Thanks, Colin and Paul >I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area