> On Dec 22, 2015, at 10:30 AM, Adamson, Andy
> wrote:
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>> On Dec 18, 2015, at 11:28 PM, Tom Haynes
>> wrote:
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>>> On Dec 13, 2015, at 11:22 AM, Elwyn Davies wrote:
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>>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all
> On Dec 22, 2015, at 6:33 AM, Elwyn Davies wrote:
>
> Hi, Andy.
>
> Thanks for the response and the updated draft.
>
> I think we are done with the editorial nits.
>
> There is a comment about the RFC 7204 issue below - and there was a separate
> email suggesting negotiation with minorversi
> On Dec 18, 2015, at 11:28 PM, Tom Haynes
> wrote:
>
>
>> On Dec 13, 2015, at 11:22 AM, Elwyn Davies wrote:
>>
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
>> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Pleas
Hi, Andy.
Thanks for the response and the updated draft.
I think we are done with the editorial nits.
There is a comment about the RFC 7204 issue below - and there was a
separate email suggesting negotiation with minorversion2 authors.
The reference to the original paper on MLS seems to have