Re: [Gen-art] [imapext] FW: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-imapapnd-appendlimit-extension-07

2015-12-28 Thread Peter Yee
Looks good to me, Jay. Thanks. -Peter -Original Message- From: Jayantheesh S B [mailto:j...@sea.samsung.com] Sent: Monday, December 28, 2015 4:10 PM To: Peter Yee; 'Barry Leiba' Cc: draft-ietf-imapapnd-appendlimit-extension@ietf.org; 'General Area Review Team'; imap.

Re: [Gen-art] [imapext] FW: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-imapapnd-appendlimit-extension-07

2015-12-28 Thread Jayantheesh S B
Thanks Peter. Addressed you comments in the attached version. -Original Message- From: Peter Yee [mailto:pe...@akayla.com] Sent: Monday, December 28, 2015 6:56 PM To: Jayantheesh S B; 'Barry Leiba' Cc: draft-ietf-imapapnd-appendlimit-extension@ietf.org; 'General Area Review Team';

Re: [Gen-art] [imapext] FW: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-imapapnd-appendlimit-extension-07

2015-12-28 Thread Peter Yee
Hi, Jay, Mostly there. For the Abstract, you've deleted the "a" before "maximum". If you do that, I'd suggest changing "size" to "sizes" for smoother reading. Of course, there may only be one maximum, but there could be more. In section 3.2, I think the comma in the 2nd sentenc

Re: [Gen-art] [imapext] FW: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-imapapnd-appendlimit-extension-07

2015-12-28 Thread Jayantheesh S B
Hi All, We have addressed the comments shared by Alexey and Peter for the version 07 document. Kindly check this version (08). If everybody is fine this version, I will upload it. Regards, Jay -Original Message- From: imapext [mailto:imapext-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Jayantheesh

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-dnsop-cookies-08

2015-12-28 Thread Peter Yee
Donald, I'm fine with the text you suggest for 5.2.4. That clarifies what goes into the process of making the determination. Kind regards, -Peter -Original Message- From: Donald Eastlake [mailto:d3e...@gmail.com] Sent: Monday, December 28, 2015

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-dnsop-cookies-08

2015-12-28 Thread Donald Eastlake
Hi Peter, On Sun, Dec 27, 2015 at 8:30 PM, Peter Yee wrote: > Hi Donald, > > Responses below. > > -Original Message- > From: Donald Eastlake [mailto:d3e...@gmail.com] > Sent: Sunday, December 27, 2015 4:31 PM > To: Peter Yee > Cc: draft-ietf-dnsop-cookies@ietf.org; gen-art@iet

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-isis-prefix-attributes-03

2015-12-28 Thread Paul Kyzivat
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Re: [Gen-art] [imapext] FW: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-imapapnd-appendlimit-extension-07

2015-12-28 Thread Jayantheesh S B
Hi Peter/Barry, Thanks for the detailed review. We will go through the review comments and update the draft accordingly. Regards, Jay -Original Message- From: imapext [mailto:imapext-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Barry Leiba Sent: Sunday, December 27, 2015 10:18 PM To: Peter Yee Cc: d