Hi Christer. Thanks. That's fine. Cheers,Elwyn
Sent from Samsung tablet. -------- Original message --------From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmb...@ericsson.com> Date: 16/09/2016 22:40 (GMT+00:00) To: Elwyn Davies <elw...@dial.pipex.com> Cc: draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update....@ietf.org Subject: RE: Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update-02 Hi Elwyn, Thanks for your review! Please see inline. Nits/editorial comments: >s3.1: It is a bit pedantic, but 'to be sure, to be sure', add new first line: > In the rest of this section references to Sections 4 and 8 are to sections >in [RFC 5761]. I’ll do that. >s3.1: Maybe s/OLD TEXT/EXISTING TEXT/ and s/NEW TEXT/REPLACEMENT TEXT/ I’ve used OLD and NEW in the past, so I’d prefer to do that in this draft too :) >s5: s/specifcation/specification/ (sorreee!) I’ll fix that. Thanks! Regards, Christer
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