Hi Ralph, thanks for the review. Comments inline.
On 10/21/16 2:52 PM, Ralph Droms wrote:
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Dan, Suhas,
Thanks for the reviews and updates
Jari
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Many thanks for your review, Francis!
Authors, do make a note of Francis’ comments.
Jari
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Hi Suhas,
The proposed edits would be fine with me. Thank you for addressing all my
concerns.
Regards,
Dan
On Wed, Oct 26, 2016 at 9:12 PM, Suhas Nandakumar (snandaku) <
snand...@cisco.com> wrote:
> Hello Dan
>
>
> My apologies for missing on the updates. For each concern raised , here
>
Hello Dan
My apologies for missing on the updates. For each concern raised , here are
my responses.
.1. The use of B - 'Both' terminology used to indicate that an attribute
is specified S - Session Level and M - Medial Level (e.g. in Section 5) may be
confusing, as there is a third