Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART IETF Last Call review for draft-ietf-stox-7248bis-12

2016-10-26 Thread Peter Saint-Andre - Filament
Hi Ralph, thanks for the review. Comments inline. On 10/21/16 2:52 PM, Ralph Droms wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-stox-7248bis-12. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review for draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-mux-attributes-14

2016-10-26 Thread Jari Arkko
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Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-roll-routing-dispatch-03.txt

2016-10-26 Thread Jari Arkko
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[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-roll-routing-dispatch-03.txt

2016-10-26 Thread Francis Dupont
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[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-l2tpext-keyed-ipv6-tunnel-07

2016-10-26 Thread Paul Kyzivat
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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review for draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-mux-attributes-14

2016-10-26 Thread Dan Romascanu
Hi Suhas, The proposed edits would be fine with me. Thank you for addressing all my concerns. Regards, Dan On Wed, Oct 26, 2016 at 9:12 PM, Suhas Nandakumar (snandaku) < snand...@cisco.com> wrote: > Hello Dan > > > My apologies for missing on the updates. For each concern raised , here >

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review for draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-mux-attributes-14

2016-10-26 Thread Suhas Nandakumar (snandaku)
Hello Dan My apologies for missing on the updates. For each concern raised , here are my responses. .1. The use of B - 'Both' terminology used to indicate that an attribute is specified S - Session Level and M - Medial Level (e.g. in Section 5) may be confusing, as there is a third