Dear Brian,
I will handle the proposed changes together with other reviews I received
lately. I will produce v18 as soon as possible.
thanks so much for your detailed review.
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2016-12-10 23:39 GMT+01:00 Brian Carpenter :
> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
> Review result: Almost Ready
>
> Gen-ART Las
Hi,
From: Christer Holmberg [mailto:christer.holmb...@ericsson.com]
Sent: Wednesday, 7 December 2016 16:23
>
> Hi,
>
>>Thanks for the review, it dovetails nicely with other feedback I've
>>received.
>>
>>Elsewhere this text has been suggested for the abstract:
>>
>>> This document provides a ful
Reviewer: Dale Worley
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document:
On 2016-12-09 22:10:14, Dale Worley wrote:
Major issue:
Section 5.3.4, Collection Font Type (font/collection)
Fragment Identifiers A string, no longer than 63 characters and
restricted to the printable ASCII subset, codes 33 - 126,
except for the 10 characters '[', ']', '(', ')', '{', '}',
'<',
On 2016-12-09 21:42:58, Dale R. Worley wrote:
But I see a technical issue: RFC 6838 section 4.3 seems to leave
parameter values to be case-sensitive, so if you want them to be
case-insensitive, you are going to have to put that in the draft.
Chris Lilley:
In fact I misunderstood your original c
