[Gen-art] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-time-format-04.txt

Dear All, changes are to address comments by Joel Halpern. Regards, Greg -- Forwarded message -- From: Date: Fri, Mar 3, 2017 at 4:54 PM Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-time-format-04.txt To: Gregory Mirsky

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-time-format-03

Yes, that makes the relationship of the conditions significantly clearer. Thank you, Joel On 3/3/17 5:46 PM, Greg Mirsky wrote: Hi Joel, thank you for your thorough review and the most helpful comments. I've did s/proposal/specification/ through the document. As for the section 2.1 would the

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-time-format-03

Hi Joel, thank you for your thorough review and the most helpful comments. I've did s/proposal/specification/ through the document. As for the section 2.1 would the following text be clearer: The rules of setting timestamp flags in Modes field in server greeting and Set-Up-Response messages

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-jsonbis-rfc7159bis-03

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[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-lamps-eai-addresses-06

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[Gen-art] Review of draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-06

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