Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-avtext-lrr-05

2017-06-11 Thread Roni Even
Hi Jonathan, I assume the new text you propose is "When C is 1, TTID MUST NOT be less than CTID, and TLID MUST NOT be less than CLID; at least one of TTID or TLID MUST be greater than CTID or CLID respectively. That is to say, the target layer index MUST be a layer upgrade from the cur

[Gen-art] draft-ietf-sacm-requirements-15.txt

2017-06-11 Thread Francis Dupont
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